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| Lear's Daughter 2006-12-09 ch 1,  | abuseGreat story! I love your take on how Xavier became paralyzed, and I was actually wondering whether you might allow me to use that premise for a fic I'd like to write for Demented Allure? Great writing as always. :) |
| Shiro Ryuu 2006-06-18 ch 1, | abuseThis is a nice piece, methinks. Scott is so angry ^^ I absolutely love the way you wrote him as a kid, and all of the flashbacks to the school’s earliest days (though in the first movie, Charles said he first met Magneto when he was 17... just a minor nit-picky thing ^^). The lines “'I mean, I only figured out because I’m a telepath.' 'I only figured it out because I saw them kissing.'” were truly priceless, grin. |
| alexceasar 2006-05-29 ch 1, | abuseDamn, that was...wow. Wonderful job. The pathos is just awesome. The relationship between Scott/Magneto and the conflict of having once cared for your greatest enemy. Great job. |
| Zuraffo 2006-04-08 ch 1, | abuseThis is a very very good article. You took fanfic to a new level! |
| LadyErinSnape 2006-02-28 ch 1, | abuseI liked the way that this was written, you gave Scott a reason to hate Magnetothat wasn't simply because one is "good" and the other "evil". It was very well written and there was steady flow to the plot. |
| Wen1 2006-02-21 ch 1, | abusegreat JOTT FOREVER Wen |
| Pinkchick 2006-02-19 ch 1, | abuseI enjoyed reading this story very much -- it was very well written and I understand why Scott hates Magneto so much... although I didn't enjoy the whole Charles/Eric dynamic, it was still very good. :) |
| Dark Angel 4523 2006-02-18 ch 1, | abuseVery interesting, I like the insight into Scott's perspective, you really seem to have him nailed down. Nice work! |