Wow. That was beautiful. A truly powerful, dark, and magical story. I can't wait to see more from you.

Man! The things they did to Edward are unbelievably terrible! He's not the freak, they are. Your story is so powerful and maintains interest throughout. I can't stop reading it. I wish it could last forever. I'm gonna shut up and keep reading now.

i love it!

you seemed to have captured Edward just right!

I just spent three days reading this story and I have to say, it really is amazing. I absolutley loved everything about it. You're brilliant, you had me crying! It's nothing like I've ever read.
Congratulations.

Ah, Eric, the devil child. I knew I sensed something there when I heard the devil child!

Perfectly disturbing

A monster of a man? You are completely misunderstanding him not being a monster! Okay, the storyline is great, but you really need to look up on spelling, commas, speech marks and capitals. You keep putting sage the spice instead of Sage the odd name. Keep up the good work though. And remember, NOT A MONSTER!

Hooray for Dea's twisted mind and story! *applauds*
Ah, it's been a great ride.
I'll go and check out those new ones now.
:)

Hi again! I was wondering if maybe you could write a scene where Edward actually manages to escape FROM the freak show, but is dragged back and punished. I always wondered what Sage would do to Jim or anyone else if that ever happened. But that is just a suggestion. Can't wait to see (read) what you have lined up next.

That ending was so cute :) Well, at least it was semi-happy :D I'd love to co-write/beta the sequel :D

Beautifully written as always, but I agree with wolfy: you should have killed Jim. It feels like you built up to it for the past 31 chapters, and now the tension is yet to be released.

Urchin says Sage can barrow her switchblade =)

All in all, a superb story. Job well done.

This is Amazing! Write a sequel. If you don't, demons will come and devour your knuckles in the night. (Yeah, I'm weird) This is so amazing. Your torturing Edward is sad... I like it! Write a sequel! Five Stars! *

I have read your entire story and I LUV your work! It is AMAZING! *Faves*

oh how terrible to do this to Ed. Sold like a cow to a farm!!
Its a wonderful story and I hope its a bettersweet end. Brovo for keeping the Scissorhands drama intacked.

sidenote: isnt Eric the name of the Phantom of the Opera? And wasnt he the devils child in a freakshow? Nice add on

hm...i'm thinking dark chocolate when you bite into it it's really bitter but over a few minutes it starts to get sweeter...as does this chapter! Yay me for thinking about food (i'm hungry now).hopefully Edward's new life would be the bearer of bad i look on the bright side, at least he's still in one one piece and ultimately-he's gets to be with Sage.

i love this pairing, i'll be depressed when they go. (sniff) i'm such a sucker for sweet romance. wonderful chapter the words and the paragraphs flowed nicely, no typos!