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| nikki.02 2007-10-18 ch 9,  | abuseYour writing is excellent! It's really great that you involved things like science and quotes with your stories...it makes it more interesting! |
| A 2006-10-29 ch 9, anon. | abuseA multiparter, a Pratchett quote, and D/L! Goodness this was fabulous. I quite liked how they didn't hook up almost instantaneously, that they had to work at it. Adds a sense of realism. Again, this was a great story. :) |
| wjobsessed 2006-05-12 ch 9, | abuseWow! Where do I start? I like how you picked subjects of science for the chpaters. I loved your quotes. I loved the different images of Danny and Lindsay(and Hopie). Beautifully and smartly written. I look forward to reading more of your stories. Thanks. |
| bluchampaegne 2006-04-04 ch 9, | abuseGreat writing, great story. Much love ΓΌ |
| Blackcat69 2006-04-04 ch 9, | abuseOoh, wonderful job! Have a great day, keep up the good work. Blackcat69 |
| Elainhe 2006-04-04 ch 9, | abuseGreat end, although I am sad that it is over. I loved the bit in the rain -- and all the rest -- nicely described. :) I really liked the note, especially the fine print, and her asking why it was only good for one kiss. Great work. :) |
| Briee 2006-04-02 ch 9, | abuseit's over? Aw! But it was a great ending! |
| lolosuper 2006-04-02 ch 9, | abuseI really like this story! The ending was really good. I hope you're gonna wrote more DL story cause I think there is not enough around here. Good Job! |
| chili-peppers 2006-04-02 ch 9, | abuseloved it! one of my fave fics!!well done!!your a great writer hope you write more!! |
| A.Boleyn 2006-04-02 ch 9, | abuseBOOM!... as Danny or Flack would say. Exactly why you are one of my favorite writers! A great way to close the story, even if I am sad that it has ended. It's true, they could make each other so happy. I loved the note he wrote - so cute and so Danny. Such an accurate description of the way he smiles at Lindsay - "Sincere, serious, tender." Can't wait to see what you have in store for your next story (hint hint!). |
| passionatecsi 2006-04-02 ch 9, anon. | abuseAW. I loved this story. Thanx for writing it! EXCELLENT JOB! |
| oddie33325 2006-04-02 ch 9, | abuseGREAT STORY!! |
| i want more! 2006-04-01 ch 9, anon. | abuseTHERE SO BETTER BE A SEQUEL! |
| Blackcat69 2006-03-30 ch 8, | abuseaw, it's so cute. can't wait to see what happens next. have a great day, Blackcat69 |
| Elainhe 2006-03-28 ch 8, | abuseI wanna know what's in that note. Now. :) Great work. Am I to take that last sentence as you nearing the end of this? |