Hyourinmaru=LOVE.

Awesome job =D

Aw, this story is so adorable. Well-written of course, even for discerning tastes, and has some surprises, like Hitsugaya's saying "i love you" and then immediately adding "But I won't have you. sorry." Drama! it's great.

Hyourinmaru being talkative is something. It is annoying, but not to the point where I was annoyed. I did go, "jez," a few times, but it didn't completely kill me. It had an annoyingly high voice when I read it, sadly. -__-' At least it was done consistently!

The zanpakutou talking was very clever and I might have to use it more often in my own stories. What a cool idea. ^^ Credit given, of course!

The scenes you chose to go through from the cannon are actually not exactly were I would expect them to be, but that actually works really well. (The lull between Aizen's apparent death and the bad fights, etc.) Not IN the fights, but the lulls around them. Domestic, yet reallisitic. Really maintains the mood of the story, which is a lighter one. I really like the choices you've made for your story! Great work!

+fav, especially for the warm, hopeful ending. That's always nice where you can get it. ^__^- Thanks for putting this up!

Nice job. Loved it!

That was a great fic. I loved how myschevious(sp?) Toshiro's zanpacto was. ^_^

ohmygod. that was so awesome! especially toushirou's zanpakutou, haha so entertaining.

"Yeah! In fact, when I brought the matter up, she told me to ** off and die" XDD

great fic, i loved it. it made me love toushirou even more ;DD

This might be the ONLY HitsuMatsu I've ever read that I actually, well...liked. A lot. I AM TEH ANGRY! Only, you know, not. Not really. More like happily and pleasantly surprised. Although I did spend most of the fic going, "this is humor, angst, right? TEH HITSUHINA SHALL RULE OVER ALL! BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!". Um...so...good job.

Oh so sweet!!

AHahahahha This was EXCELLENT!! Brilliantly writtn! Funny as hell! And just all around great!

can u wright more hitsumatsu storys please (-.-)

I was supposed to send you feedback on this story a while ago but didn't know if I could do it without coming across as an incoherent idiot (or a creepy stalker) so here is my attempt at an intelligent fangirl reply.

OH MY GOD, THIS WAS DARLING! I must have read this fic at least twenty times and it still makes me laugh. Right from, "You have no poetry in your soul" (I *love* that line so much). I love your Hyourinmaru, him and his "Toushirou, buddy, need I remind you this is your golden opportunity" to him to howling when Hitsugaya throw in his disclaimer. ROTFL.

Hitsugaya's disclaimer gets me every time, and Matsumoto's "Name them" and the ensuring reasons-not-to-reasons-invalidated conversation is one of my all-time favorite in fanfic. It just sparkles and hits all the right tones and notes, while acknowledging the age, rank, and childhood sweetheart thing that other fics tend to ignore.

I especially appreciate how the Hinamori issue was dealt with here, that he's not quite over her and that Matsumoto would be the one to kick Hitsugaya in the ** if he wasn't there for her :) And much love to the fiasco with Abarai and co. in the changeroom, and Hitsugaya's reaction to Matsumoto's legs (cracks me up *every time*). I love your Hitsugaya. He's such an adorable darling, and 100% in-character.

I could go on for a long time about everything I like about this fic. It's absolutely wonderful, and had me grinning and wanting to dance when it was over. Thanks a lot for writing it!

Beautiful work! Just gorgeous!

If you write more of this sort of thing, I will love you forever in the most platonic way possible.

And do ignore me, as I am a rabid fangirl in search of fluff.

Carry on!

Hahaha. This is so funny. Definitely one of the better HitsuMatsus I've read. You bring in just the right amount of certain things - like Hitsugaya's relationship with Hinamori. You acknowledge that it's important, but that neither is IN love with the other, and move on to the main focus again. Hurrah! And holy crap, Hyourinmaru was too great. The way you wrote him, he was a good match for Hitsugaya in the way that he kept things light, but had a serious side and a sharp tongue. Your Hitsugaya also had a sharp tongue for certain, and I love seeing that. And how you had him be clearly susceptible to Matsumoto's legs was cute. It might sound weird, but it was seriously cute because it showed that he IS a guy. I could just see him reacting like a total dope, standing there like it was the first time he saw a pair of legs. Haha. Cute. And well - the ending! So great! Matsumoto's daring attitude in reaction to Hitsugaya's defense? Awesome. It didn't rush them into anything like most other HitsuMatsus do, but it did toss the readers a bone by confirming a future there. And the waiting even reinforced their feelings! It was just too sweet. Obviously, I enjoyed this a bunch. I hope you write some other pieces!

- Sakura

Nice job.

Hyourinmaru made me laugh so hard.

Hyourinmaru really is the wicked character. I like this fic.

this fic is genius!!Hyourinmaru reminds me of that dragon in mulan..i'm sorry for the comparison but i do think he's a very comedic dragon in this story and i found myself imagining future bleach episodes with talking zanpakutos..
thanks for the story!