Very interesting spin on the Blade Children with the computer virus thing. And a nice touch with her dad being part of Les Soldats. Spelling and grammar was good, no complaints there, though you did leave out a couple quotation marks around some of the dialouge. The only major problem was that Eyes was a bit ooc. It's not like him at all to risk his life for someone or to care for someone that much. Still a good story, though.