Yes that is ture Harry needs to fall asleep instead falling unconius

I wish this was longer. I loved the new ideas you came up with such as new spells or using animals to attack. They didn't seem too crazy or far fetched. The part about the Dementor was a great twist to the original. I look forward to reading anything else you have written.

That was amazing. I hope there will be a sequel.

Great.

Im still amazingly impressed that you managed to write all this before the actual book came out. There were times when I actually felt like I was reading one of her books. You wrote it so well and made everything so easy to picture, I had a hard time remembering that it was a fanfic, not the real thing.

Definately one of, if not the best fic I've read.

That was a freaking amazing idea!

The whole hand grabbing the curse and then shoving it in Voldemort's neck!

I didnt realize you wrote this before DH came out. It makes it all the more better with your theory and plot. Its very immpressive.

And I liked the last sentence.

Im guessing Ron's gift is going to be big...like throwing fireballs or something.

He's just taking a little longer is all.

Nice chapter...Kinda makes me think a bit, of what, im not sure.

I think you wrote it to be complicated. Or at least thats what I got out of it.

What I dont like, is that they left the other world by themselves with a completely incapable Neville to save it.

Psh. As if a little curse like that could kill Harry. And whats up with Ginny?

He's survived it once, he can do it again.

So Moody got taken down by Malfoy? Thats a bit sad. Malfoy seems so bitter, angry, and cold here. Its sad.

Nice cliffy by the way. Luckily I can just hit next and read chap 16.

Impressive of Harry. Although Im a little dissapointed that Ginny got caught in the first place. But then again, she wasnt expecting a Death Eater.

I like the twist.

Harry meeting his parents is going to be hard...

Yay! Ginny came!

And I like their plan.