wow, this is very cool and funny story! i hope you'll post the next chapter soon!

Hehehe, I love the slapstick! Thanks for the review of 'The Tournament'

Ah! Jin got caked! XD
This is a really good beginning. And I think I know how this is going to turn out. Real nice!!

Hey sweety.I finished reading :)

It's a pretty good start.A few grammar flaws but you already adressed that.
Make sure you keep the characters in character.Focus on that and I'm sure it'll be great.

I like it, it definitly sounds like good 'un

Cool chapter and that was funny about what happened to Xiao and Miharu. Update!

Hey Sidrah! It's Liz, your new buddy from New York...

This was cute. But as you said, there were some grammatical errors and it wouldn't be bad if you were a bit more verbose.

Sounds cool! And I like the fact that Jin got caked in the end. Mwhahahaa.

Hehehe...
That was good...

cool its very different please update

Let us all applaud you for a good first chapter...i do find it kinda weird tho but thaz ok! im looking foreward to another chapter. i wish to see where this is going.

~lIN

Wow, awesome work mate!! I love it Sidrah! It totally rocked! ^_^* Keep it up and have fun!!

Ps: How u doing? Tell me when you're on msn, and, oh, you've gotta use isawhilhe@onlin.no, not to send mails, coz I usualy don't check my mal there, sinc eI go by the other one...Cya!!

Take care,
Izzy

hey sidrah great chapter...xiao and miharu are so funny!good luck and update soon!