That's so sad at the end. I always thought those two should get together... Do they ever properly hook up? I've read all of the Tortall books, but it's been such a long time since I read the "Trickster's" series that I don't remember...

Anyways, this was beautifully written, and it is so on my favs!

this is an amazing poem. nothing else to say about it really.

oh.my.GOD. they are possibly the saddest poems ive ever read. amazing, but heart breaking. you wrote them?-they are brilliant, trully amazing! well done...dom and kel, both dead. boho. i dont normally read about their deaths (in fact, i try to avoid them) but this was great. in a sad way!

Poignant and beautiful.

I am normally not the one to go and read poems but these truly touched my heart. They told a sad story and one that i can imagine for Dom and Kel and Neal who finally made their dream come true.

wow that was really good.. thanks for doing Neal's POV for me... Still.. it was very sad... and it made me want to cry! But I loved it! Awesome job!
Caiti

That is, with out a doubt, the best poem I have ever read. I sobbed shamelessly throughout. I love how you gave both Dom and Kel's POV,

Please write more--I need a good cry once in a while

~Your Newest Fan

OH how depressing...in a good way...that had better have been from dom

Aww it's so sad:(

very very nice! I greatly enjoyed the second section... the beginning needs some work... it's ... stilted

might be timing

Anyway, really enjoyed the second half!

~*Erkith*~

sosad!@!

Aw, that was sad... yet another KD, and they're haunting me... You see, I've got this idea briming in my head, but I know I can't write it because I have too many going at once!! ARG!
Anyways, I'm getting a little off topic. I loved it, as always, and I think you're an awesome writer! Keep it up!

wowser that was so good! im so glad you took my suggestion. or maybe u had that idea all along. anyway, i love how u take the sory and put it into poetry form! its very, very good and i love it. wow, so does he propose in the peaceful realms? cuz thats like the only place they would be together. and thy didnt confess their love. 2 bad. but they're always together ion the peaceful realms. right on! i love this chapter!

Very cool.

Aw. So, so sweet. I absolutely love it. Were you planning on doing anyone else?

Aw... It's so sad!

You like Ameilia Atwater-Rhodes too? I like Hawksong the best of that series, and her vampire books are COOL.