Wow. I'm really not sure what elese there is to say. I really loved this one. Almost makes me want to cry with her *sniffles* it's rather sad. Wonderful Job XD

Sweet and short! Please update!

Heh, sorry I completely forgot to fav this story on the new account XD I sort of forgot your penname...oops *smiles sheepishly* and now I finally have it back YAY XD I know I already told you, but I should say this again...I LOVED THIS!! It was really cute ^__^

I really like this story! it's different from the others that I have read! Please update!

You're so cute. ^_~ CAITY WUV TO WUV YOUR FICCIES~~:D

OMG why didn't you say you updated!! That was soo sweet. I asblotuley loved it XDD (talk about porrfreading! I meant absolutely by the way if you were wondering! ^^)

aww! so sweet!

Once again, beautifully written, and so painstakingly short that it makes me crave more. But then aain, it's different, to have something detailed and small carry so much content. Good job. Can't wait to see more!

Aw. OMG this is so cute! I love it. Beautifully written too, I like the wording.

Beautiful descriptions. Serious potentially. Way too short. Definitely continue, but make it longer! Good job!

We all know it's Tidus, but it's not clear who the girl it. My first guess was Yuna, untill i read the authors note. It's perfect and very good otherwise.

I want you to. Always love Tidues/Rikku stuff.

please update.. well done. :D

Wo! This was sweet. Okay, i had to read it again real quick but here goes:

I love this because it has some super layers. Your language was cool because you used terms that would describe water and sun (or sunlight) to describe Rikku and Tidus' actions. I don't know if this was on purpose, but it seems to echo how Tidus' name has relation to water in our language, and in Japan it has relation to the sun.

Did you notice that every paragraph started with 'She' except the 5th one? I thought it was cool, you should think about making the 5th paragraph 'She let a soft gasp escape her lips' or something, because Scottie2 loves patterns and symmetry. But that's just me.

Super. :) I love short ficcies like this.

I really like how you started, and ended, with the same simple sentence. It really pulled it all together well, and it has great description. REALLY good, especially considering how short it is! Haha, good work!