 Whisper from the Shadows 2007-05-27 . chapter 9YAY, you're back. Glad to see you updating this story.
I always said Wade spent too much time on the internet, the lil perv (not that I'd blame him with Monique). As for Shego's little escapade... glad she finally found out what all Dr. D had (and allowed me to finally find out), but even in fuming rage I'm surprised she didn't see the attack from behind her coming. God have mercy on him when she gets out of the freezer.
I know it's unlikely, but I realy want to see Team Impossible kick the ever-living crap out of Du. And as for Team Possible/Stoppable vs. Team Go... please, we all know that Team Go doesn't stand a chance.
Anywho, thanks for updating, I'll be waiting for your next installment. |
 Whisper from the Shadows 2006-07-11 . chapter 8All kinds of WOW. Wade and Monique in the marathon to get into GJ? That was a stroke of genius, most would expect Wade to get in on the tech side if ever, and I don't think I ever pictured Monique getting involved without (in her words from ASiT) "twenty years of training".
And the idea of Will keeping up is gonna be hilarious. Especially after Ron's confidence in the dojo, Ron's gonna probably give Kim a run for her money. Tall, lanky, slightly "goofy" walking people (ex: Ron) have a tendancy to be good distance runners.
I can't wait for more. Please update soon. |
 Whisper from the Shadows 2006-06-19 . chapter 7I feel like I'm the only one reading this amazing story. And I do mean amazing, you have me constantly scrolling to read what happens next (and as always I can't wait for the next chapter).
Nana is toying w/ GJ? That's awesome, someone needs to ruffle their feathers once in a while. Now that I think about it, maybe it's genetic.
The camera hack was a "you rock in stereo" moment for Wade, giving Kim and Ron almost an hour to get in before they even knew they were on the way. w00t Wade! Then to see Betty's face when they dropped in, I would have paid money to see that (well, maybe).
As for the marathon, I'm gonna gander Ron has stamina... if you know what I mean.
Absolutely positively love it, keep it going, even if I am the only reviewer... Please :D |
 Whisper from the Shadows 2006-06-07 . chapter 6Okay, now you are the sick and twisted one... I want, no I NEED to know what Drakken has in that briefcase.
Even with the sims Wade has to prove Shego's innocent, will the gov't remove the unspoken bounty from her head? And when do we get to see Shego turn Dr. D into a smoldering pile of ash? Or does Ron and Kim get to find a more... inventive way of removing him from the scene?
There are about a hundred questions running through my head right now, but I'll wait just like every body else. Please update ASAP. |
 Whisper from the Shadows 2006-05-17 . chapter 4Interesting... very very interesting. I know there are no guns used in the KP universe among villains or heros. But I think the cops carry in the show, they're bad shots, but they carry (I could be wrong, but I'm pretty sure they do).
And I was curious about some of the practical uses of guns; I grew up, and still live in the middle of nowhere, where guns are part of life. I would have gone hungry on many occasions if it weren't for my rifle that is currently sitting in the corner of my room (looks over shoulder, 'yep still there'). And what about 2nd amendment rights, trust me I've done my research on this, citizens have the right to keep and bear. I'd be joining the anti-anti-gun revolt faster than Rufus can eat a taco, and I know many others who would be with me.
But other than my concern with a big brother take over of the world, this is a WONDERFUL story. One that I hope you keep going (coughhintcough). I can't wait to find out what Shego finally decides to do to Drakken, because you know she's going to when Kim and Ron come to get her. Danke. |
 GargoyleSama 2006-05-17 . chapter 4What a wonderful way to explain why there are no firearms in the KPverse. |
 CloudedReign 2006-02-19 . chapter 1great story id like to see a new one soon and the idea of Shego Ron and Kim is a awesome idea |
 Brimmstone 2006-02-18 . chapter 1Looks like a very interesting first chap. Looking forward to more. |
 Otritzi 2006-02-17 . chapter 1Can I play with Dr. Drakken? Please? I'll be sure to incinerate the body when I'm done. Or I could sell him to you as a slave if you want...I mean, My Kim could probably break him with a look but she tends to go the extra few yards anyway.
Keep the chapters coming! |
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