*giggle* i keep my promise, i (finally) finished it and it was lovely. I trully love it, loved it, loved it:D

Keep up the good work
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I think you are fantastic and put in so much effort in this. Was reading this when im too stress over my report. Gee, thanks and gambettee! =)

Just finished the story, and lemme tell you, I think it was REALLY good! I wish Soulithe didn't have to go like that, though. Couldn't Minoru or Hideki or someone have taken him in? Oh well, great story anyway!

I've only read the manga a couple of times, but I think saying something smells divine is OOC for Hideki. hee, full of energy!

Aww! When Chii said a motot stopped, for some reason I imagined how that felt...it would feel empty and horrible.

This is a very original idea, I just skimmed but from what I've read it's VERY good, especially for a first attempt.

YAY another chapter... KEEP IT UP!

YAY continue! YAY its really good and i love ur style of writing!! keep on going cause its an amazing story

what an amazing story... too bad ypu havent added a chapter in a while... this is truley amazing keep it up!

WOW!! I love it!! Keep Writing

it was good but the only problem is that chi has white or ivory hair and her eyes arn't brown but amber. other then those little mistakes it is a good story

hey great sotry so far plz update soon i would give u adive but i am a new fan adn just got started with the manga tonight so sorry but it seems really good so far

Nice!! Can't wait to read the next chapter!! :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D

Must...read...next...chapter!