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| TangoSVU 2008-09-14 ch 4,  | abusehm... I am curious to see where this is going, and who the perp is! Even though it's slightly OOC you haven't overdone it, and the biting interplay between the detectives has been sorely missed since the first couple of seasons, so it's nice to see that again. luv luv! ~TangoSVU |
| collin395 2007-11-27 ch 4, | abusehey awesome story |
| Tricki 2006-10-14 ch 4, anon. | abuseOHH!! Dun dun dun! Love this chapter! The perfect balance between intrigue, suspense and EO! Also I love that El's kids love Liv as much as we all do (but obviously not as much as he does) Well done babe! Tricki xoxoxoxox |
| obsessedwithstabler 2006-10-02 ch 4, | abuseUh oh, this is gonna be good... (rubs hands together and grins evilly) Excellent... |
| onetreefan 2006-10-02 ch 4, | abuseOOH! Great update! You are so awesome! I cannot wait for more... EO! onetreefan |
| Colores 2006-10-02 ch 4, anon. | abuseToo lazy to log in, lol. Great chapter! Creepy! Some guy is stalking El and Liv! Gah, keep the safe LOL! Well, I loved it and I hope you can update again soon. |
| TwistOftheScarlettRose 2006-10-02 ch 4, | abuseOoh scary, I love it. Update Soon! |
| iluvstabler 2006-10-02 ch 4, | abuseGood update! Personally, I think that he should take Elliot...:) Please update ASAP! This is an interesting story. |
| Kelly of the midnight dawn 2006-10-02 ch 4, | abuseAwesome chapter! I love that we get to see what the bad guy is doing. But what exactly did the note say? I wanna know what the note said. Will we find out in the next chapter? Great story, you are a natural. Update soon or I'll harrass you unendingly Elliot and Olivia for eternity Merry Shipper Christmas Proud EO shipper -Kelly |
| Xxchelly 2006-06-03 ch 3, | abusethis is really good so far keep up the good work! ~chelly |
| Tricki 2006-06-01 ch 3, | abuseAh! Mobile phones are EVIL! Great chap ;) This is one of the best bits : "“Why would anyone wanna walk through the park after ten o’clock is beyond me,” Fin muttered under his breath. Olivia shot him a look and tried to keep from laughing. “Moving on,” she coughed. “What else do we know?”" Lol, love it sis! Keep up the good work! |
| TwistOftheScarlettRose 2006-05-30 ch 3, | abuse*Gasp!* You updated!! I love it... You made my day!! and I'm very tired right now after working almost a week of double shifts (Now you know why I haven't updated my story :)). Anyway, I'll get on telling you what I loved about chapter three-- I love how Olivia and Elliot teased each other... Her with the clothes, him with the last slice of pizza. I'm glad that Elliot opened up to her about how he really didn't enjoy the date, and then kept clueing her in about how he loved somebody else; her actually. And now I'm wondering, if the guy in the park has anything to do with the person that was watching Olivia and Elliot. Please update soon, so we can find out... PLEASE! --Twist of the Scarlett Rose-- |
| liviafan1 2006-05-30 ch 3, | abuseSo glad you decided to write a story! It's really awesome, btw. Love the EOness! *oh, and the case is good, too LOL* -Liv |
| RangeMan 2006-05-29 ch 3, | abuseI love your story. It's so well writen, it's hard to believe that this is your first story. Good luck with your other chapters i can't wait for an update |
| Color Esperanza 2006-05-29 ch 3, | abuseOoh I'm definitely gonna follow this story. You write really well and I see an interesting plot coming along here! Great interaction between Olivia and Elliot which is balanced nicely by the suspense with the perp. Please update soon! |