Not what I was expecting, and in a good way. I'm glad it didn't turn out like most Itachi/Hana fics, where she simply pines after him.

Pretty interesting.

ooh... i never thought of this pairing before. this fic was good. juicy ending, by the way. very nice : )

LOVED IT! Update soon!

Well I raely liked it. I thought the idea was realy good. Moch better then anything I could write. A interesting paring. I've never realy thought about it before. It was writen well.(My friends agree with me). But I didn't get the ending. Could do with abit of work. I thought that wasn't as good as I had been expecting. But over all I realy enjoyed it. Keep them coming. :)

During the whole story, I was "Where's the kiss?" (and I got one, but I missed a grown-up one) and, at the end...

Although I wanted a heated kiss between these two, it made me laugh.

Terrific.
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love /nazaliasan

aww. lol. Hana sure doesn't give him what he wants. I am here after seeing a picture of Hana and thinking hey, they look similiar in a not at all way. I wasn't looking for any romance pwp's, just interaction and I was happy to find it. While I may not like the itahana pairing like a lot, I think it's cute in it's own way. Thanks for writing this I enjoyed it very much. 9/10. Take care now. Lol. I also have Naruto dreams. Crazy fans~ ^.6

I think... I want to be just like her when I grow up! hehehe Very good story! I loved the ending!

This is interesting...^_^ Biting seems to have a place of honor in your fics. I love crack pairings, that's why I read this. OMG, crack pairing with basis!! AH! You're awesome!

That's right, Hana! Bite the man! I would love a sequel to this, it was so well done. But it could stand on it's own if you chose to leave it.

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You keep making me CRY. I don't know why. I've read everyone of the Naruto fics here, I'm sure, and each time, every sentence SLAMS into me, tearing up the emotion, raw and new and everything at once.

I... I love Hana. You are one of the FEW, and I mean it, FEW writers who can make me love a minor female character. You could write Sakura, and I'd love her. You could write Anko, and I'd love her. You write Kurenai, and I love her. You write Tenten, Hana, and by everything I've ever, EVER read, and I love them.

Hana's lines. She's just so... She is unpredictable. Utterly, and wholly feral, and no matter what, she won't give up. won't give in, and won't die. She will never be defeated. It's... it's different from Naruto's attitude, somehow. Her team is her family. Her family is her village. Her village is her life. It's... it's all there. You can see it. She doesn't need to SAY it like an idiotic robot. But it's there. It's burning under her skin, and no matter what, she may die and she will NEVER be defeated.

Because of this drive, this emotion, this unpredictability, Itachi's just... HER hate is different from Sasuke's. She is... I don't know. There's so many ways to read it, and every time I come back, I'm trying to guess. What are you trying to say? What is Itachi trying to say? What does he want from her? Is he trying to validate his existence using her hate? Does he love her?

And then Hana would say, "If you’re going to kill me, do it. And stop checking me out. Damn necrophiliac.”

... It kills me. She just KILLS me. Every single time.

And the last one is the best.

I... I'm in love with your work.

Hoorah! Hana kicks **, and I loved how you portrated her. Very nicely pulled off, for a crack pairing! =D

Recently I've come into liking the HanaxItachi, and this has been the first fic I've read of them and I must say that I'm now in love with your writing. The two of them were perfectly in character and the ending was so...I dunno...words can't describe how awsome this story was. ^-^

Very good, very realistic, but it seemed to end too abruptly, like it left something unsaid. Good job, though, you've got a lot or talent. Keep writing.

I liked this alot! Is it a one-shot though? Could I request that you pick it up again?

I loved your Hana. Unlike the Hana characterized in the other Itachi/Hana fics, she is not off-canon weak and all "damsel-in-distress". And I've always been intrigued by Itachi, so a combination of both seems amazing.

More, please?