glad sev is free

harry would not be in his 50s, he would be in his 40s with severus being in his late 60s
--harry 17 or 18 when slave bond cast
-- severus being 36-38 when it was cast

and Narcissa with severus..ICK..but whatever

not too bad

poor sev

O.O wow, a slave fic with a satisfying conclusion. *claps*

i think it would be nice if you explained mroe about the punishment ginny gave her kids.
Hermione snorted. “The way you punished them that time they made him kneel, I’m not.”
it would be cool if you explained that a little more but still, i luv this story so much! (i even printed it out andput it in a 1/2 binder)

Nice job! I enjoyed reading your short story! :)

Very good

sad, disturbing. honestly, it nearly made me want to cry. very well written though, and i enjoyed the depth you gave the characters.

Hi (the 3rd todaay)

This story is great, your style is very good, its really a good slavestory and yes i pity Severus and im happy for the happy end u wrote...

the quillthing was kinda hart, i mean its only a quill, but as its Harrys, well... so be it, poor Severus.

Mondkalb

*pur*
Nice ending! I liked it. Though I always feel uncomfortable at imagining my favourite characters being so old. *lol*
Neat writing!
- Dime

That was great. I wish it was longer though. Good job. :D

This story is so hard to read because it is so sad, but I can't stop reading it because it is so good.

Wow I feel so sorry for snape. This story is really good though. I have never read a story like this before

One, I love you forever for the Narcissa/Snape pairing. I think they're adorable together, and Narcissa is one of my favorite of the "evils" (other than, Snape, of course.) Personally, I can't really call her evil anyway, ever since the Spinner's End scene in HBP.

Anyway, thanks for the happy ending. Many authors would describe in detail the years, yet you skipped to the end. Thank you for that, *lol*. Poor Snape, you just want to give him a hug, you know?

Wow this story was amazing!
One thing- harry would be in his late 40s not 50s
other than that this story was absolutely amazing...and i can't wait to read more of you stories :)

Wow! great first chapter!
this is really interesting :)
Off to read chapter 2