(Overall review) Great, twisted Pokemon vampire story. Ash and Misty are quite literally "at eachother's throats" in this fic, aren't they? The concept of the feeders and how they originated was quite clever, too. I did find Ash and Misty a bit OOC, but considering one's a vampire and the other's a vampire slayer, I suppose we can't expect them to be sweet and cute anymore, can we? I can't wait for the sequel.

This story is really cool, but really weird. I like it.

i love this! it has suspence and action, blood, gore, blood, and did i mention blood! i spend tuesday nights reading fics, and on my fav list, it says coolist fic ever. the travling is a little confusing,but this is one of the best!

I like your fanfic. I believe mine will interest you as well, it's very deep and dark. It has three chapters up. It contains demons and pokemon. It's called "The Secret Legacy". So if you find the time to read it leave a review. ^_^

nice i usually hate vampire stories but this one was actually really good and i'm glad that i read it all the way through. It is pretty interesting and i hope you do a follow up sequel

coll...i love this story!!i'm so shocked when i see the end,and i see your profile,and.."hora,mitsuketa na!" YAY! you've made other story!!t'care!

-Karai-

Wow, another good'un. When I started reading, I wasn't sure what the "dark figures" were, obviously something supernatural, but certainly not vampires. And Pikachu? Marill? Damn.

It was a hell of a ride. Thanks a lot. Looking forward to the continuation.

Well, I spent all last night reading this, and i like it, but i have come to the conclusion that Ash and Misty need to have feelings for each other, sure its hard when one is a blood sucking monster, but still, I always thought they loved each other ^_^

me:wow.this story is wicked long but i kept reading eacause of the suspence in the story
Ash:why am i an evil blood-sucking monster?
me:its a creative idea that she made up so deal with it!!
Ash:okay!geez i was just curious!!
me:i luved your story but for now im tired of fanfiction so im gonna go on my club penguin account but i promise ill read the sequal!!this is an awesome story!!i think that in the sequal ash miraculously turns back into a human and that you make it an AAMRN because i luv those!!Ash do you have anything to say?youve been awfully quiet this review and your usually butting into what i say.
Ash:huh?oh yeah i forgot about the review*embarrased*
me:i could swear that your actually getting along with me 0_0.
Ash:am not!!
me:same old stubborn Ash.^_^
Ash:*mutters*stupid umbreon...
me:im gonna kill you for that if you say those words one more time!
Ash:0.0!i shall obey you master umbreon!!*kneels and starts to bow*
me:0.0!!okay...bye!i have to figure out whats wrong with Ash...ill read the sequal tonight so expect a review from me soon.ta-ta for now!!Ash?you okay...
Ash:must obey...
me:0.0

ooh, bloody. and totally leaves off on a cliffhanger that can only be remedied by a sequel.
and the hopeless romantic in me wishes for some sort of an AAMRN, even if it will inevitably end in tragedy and the death of a bloodsucking vampire.
anywho, lovely story. gory, and totally not the kiddish Pokemon you know. looking forward to a sequal of the same caliber :3

~Yuki

waw! Que final! o.o. Me quedé con los ojos en ese tamaño!
Me gustó muchisimo el final que le has dado... y entiendo lo que decias sobre el AAML, pero yo decia algunos suaves 'Hints' sobre esta hermosa pareja. Adoro a Ash y a Misty ^^
En fin, esperaré ansiosa tus otrso fics aaml! ^^

Cuidate y continua escribiendo!
Ah, y pondré a Clover en mi favorita lista de autores n.n

Sorry, for my mesnaje in spanish, but, my english is bad -gomen... u_u

wow. this story was AMAZING all that action and the drama and every thing else this is the best vampire story i have ever read EVER! i would've cried if it werent for the interuptions here. anyway i am looking forward to the sequel whenever you get to it

Hi! your fic is cute, please up date soon,right?. And... something aaml please?

Gracias! ^^

Ash & Misty4ever

Hi! Like me!.Please update soon

Awesome plot, great inventiveness... What more can I say?