This is so sweet. You're very descriptive. It's great writing. Check out my stories? ^_^

Awwhs..This is so cute..
You should had made it longer though!
>_>

i love this story its so good i hope you write another one with those two!

go a little mushy at the end, but over all, well written. =)

Too sweet. :)

Omg...that was beautiful. (Grabs a tissue and dabs eyes) I love this pairing!

Well done! Beautiful!

loved it! clorith fics are just too awesome for words!