Ha Ha! I love it.

Ha! Perfect example of Rofl. Mean as I am, compared to the piles of awful MLR fiction here yours was a nice, entertaining find. Very good!

yes. because people normally go fishing for snakes and people normally use boars as bait... Thor is so wonderfully ignorant.

Ah, the exuberance of testosterone. *rolls eyes* I hope the serpent catches Him. heh.

heheheh, poor Yamino. He's going to be caught at a fish. heheheheh . though you cold go frther with this storyline, like add more chapters of Thor trying to catch him and then Loki comeing home.

Being familar with Norse mythology, your little blurb intrigued me. I must say, I was not disappointed! I found it very funny.. was reminded of Asterix's Oblix with the boar.. and I really enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing!

*laughs her head off* Ahh, funny. XD Thor sounds like a little kid. *continues howling with laughter*

Maybe at the end... To add effect, a "..." before Odin's words would be appropriate? =3