As inexperienced as I am when reading pieces like this, I just have to say that it was brilliant. And that's really saying something, honest; I don't read most M-rated fiction.

I loved how you portrayed Kaoru; she was absolutely hilarious, as was Kenshin.

The emotions were almost tangible, which is really hard to accomplish in fiction. A job well done.

I can't wait to see what else you have in store for all of us readers concerning your other works.

I loved it! Great one-shot, i'm glad that kaoru and kenshin already knew each other in the beginning of the story bc I dislike one-shots where they've never met each other and wam-bam, they're in love and getting married or whatever...but you did a very good job with this story, i enjoyed it immensly!

that was awesome...

*grins devilishly* Oh that was so evil! Sano deserved it...even if everything was for a good cause. I just love good smut between Kenshin and Kaoru.

Bis?