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Lilac Phoenix
2006-06-29
ch 1,
abuseThis is a nice little one-shot on the parents of Dante and Vergil. ^^ Your writing style always captivates me and you always put great stories out to read. Keep it up!
The Dark Magician
2006-03-11
ch 1, anon.
abuseWow, Sparda sounds so sweet in this one. The depiction of prejudice despite the fact he saved the entire planet is also not far fetched, there probably are people that narrow minded around, so it's entirely plausible. I also like the way the ending implies that Sparda goes to live with Eva, it's not something that needed to be said explicitly in the story. Bravo. ^_^
dantegirl84
2006-03-11
ch 1,
abuseThis one is sweet. Sparda seemed so gentle I have to love this :)
aoi senshi
2006-03-02
ch 1,
abuse...this fic is so waah, can't find the words for it! Lovely, nice, Cool! Just loved it!! :D
Cekil1
2006-02-23
ch 1,
abuseAlready knows her name does he? Stalker! Nah, seriously though, good job Sunday. It still amazes me how you're able to take these two characters (whom no one knows much about) and make them out to be as deep and complex as the main cast. You've got real talent when it comes to writing. Don't forget that.
DevilsNeverDie
2006-02-22
ch 1, anon.
abuseWow this is well written and rich in style and flow, very good! I like your interpretation of this couple that is hardly known.
Laryna6
2006-02-20
ch 1,
abuseI didn't review when I added this to the C2? I'm sorry. This is great even on a later reading. Looking forward to that gift-fic!
Vylet Lust
2006-02-20
ch 1,
abuseLove it! That was very sweet and well-written. Keep it up and can't wait to read your next upcoming works. Excellent fanfic! LoL! Add to favelist. ~p.k.
Bustahead
2006-02-19
ch 1,
abuse(** head slowly to one side)

don't tell me that this is going to be a mere one-shot is it? Because this deserves another few chapters to go with it, I think.
Jackpot
2006-02-18
ch 1, anon.
abuseOh wow that's just great! The entire Sparda and Eva interaction was superbly done, and the other people's hatred for him, even though he saved them, was very realistic.

More please!
Anonymous
2006-02-18
ch 1, anon.
abuseSo pretty! I like how you made Eva strong willed and graceful. It's how I like to think of her. XD

One thing I noticed: In the game, Sparda saved the world 200 years ago, but we know Eva and Sparda didn't meet until much, much later. XD I'm glad you made it out like Sparda continuously protects the people instead of jumping right in. Bravo!
cassandra
2006-02-18
ch 1, anon.
abusewow well written and marvelously done. You did a great job with sparda x eva ,keep itup./
Maria
2006-02-18
ch 1, anon.
abuseD'aw, that was sweet
Keahi Mitsahima
2006-02-18
ch 1,
abuseWow.. this is really pretty.. (giggles) Sparda's such a charmer. And Eva is so.. beautiful! You make pretty fics, V.
Xielzen
2006-02-18
ch 1, anon.
abuseWell well this piece is very well written. I'm not a fan of this usual type genre but even I must admit it is good! Well done and keep up the good writing!
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