HAWKMON is sso sweet

OH Love it =3 Keep it going

Yay! come the old Gang! I'm sad to learn that it was THE Agumon, though.

I loved Arukenimon's quip at her boss, but the "should of" kinda took my fun away. Big pet peeve of mine. Also, you wanted "grazed", not "graced"

=D yay you updated ^.^ i love this story Keep it up

=D i can'e wait for the next chapter ^.^

hehe i love plot twists =D

hehe Man i love the story so far

^.^ again I Love it

hehe it keeps getting better & better

hehe i love the whole "he needs to stand here& look important" comment XD

Heh Yamaki, i just realised that XD anyways... I love it

hm again a very interesting plot so far =D

oh i love it, very interesting so far =D

This is too weird. All the characters fit. And Davis as a Feudal Lord? Too cool!

just as promised, a lot of introspection and angst, and no plot. Not that it's a badthing, of course ^_^

Grammar check:
- I’ve think I’ve done (ne?)
- It would hard to have any hope (Missing a word)
- as she slide open the door (should be "slid")
- Isn’t there something give can do to help them? (hum... that "give" seems out of place)
-looked very determined at his partner. (looks like it should be "determinedly")
- to wake up, and tiptoe (lose the comma)
- he wracked his brain ("racked", not "wracked")
- Instead, we can choose a new, unfamiliar path. (missing closing quotes)