Brillant idea and thanks for writing.

Like it! Some aspects of this story were perfect...like, James being late for the first patrol, being theatrical, messing it up while talking to Lily (Honestly? Board?), a decent Divination prof., James and Lily bickering. “Why can’t you just say that you’re an awful singer?” :D Definitely perfect! I loved that it was Lily who asked him out!
I think that Lily's fear that she might actually like him, certainly doesn't fit in with the rest of your story. She hated him, for his short-comings...now he's changed, for good. She couldn't have liked him before, as per your story. That's just my opinion, though. :) Take it easy!

NICE! lol that was really cute

haha! Oh, that was good, one of the most convincing stories about that I've read!

That was freaking BRILLIANT! I absolutely love the end. I actually loved all of it.

Well done!

Loved the ending! I guess I'm on a read-all-your-stories spree today. Great ending.

hey you are a really good writer i really like the story do you think that you could write more i would really love it if you did thanks

The idea of Lily as a cursebreaker at Gringotts, and therefore one who could have trained Bill, makes me grin. Lovely idea of their bickering calming Harry. Great ending too.

If you are still reading reviews on this story, I(tenten's mom) have just read this for the first time. As the wife of another "James Potter", married very romanitacly now for twenty-five years. You so nailed it! Thank you for this beautiful romantic gift. Lady-you so rock! Keep write, dreaming, believing, you are going places...never doubt it.

Tenten's mom

Amazing! I love it! I particularly like James talking about Potters. lol. Very Well Written, I cant wait to read more of your stuff.

I have to say, I don't usually like James & Lily stories. They are usually portrayed as too sickenly sweet or just too much bickering (giving both characters huge unrealistic egos).

However, your story is...just right.

I actually really really enjoyed it! Thank you!

hey chattypandagurl,
hey ... amazin story ...plz tell me ur gonna continue?
plz. plz. plz. plz. it rocks !
c'ya
best of luck!

;)

Love,

Julia

Ah, very enjoyable fluffy L/J goodness. I liked the Lily POV, and her noticing that he had changed. The closet scene with Sirius was especially funny, and I liked the vision as well. Very nicely done.

The whole process of Lily realizing that James was the One seemed kind of rushed to me. I thought that maybe Lily should've taken some time to think about the whole Pensieve thing. For the purposes of the story, the contemplation thing wouldn't have been all that fun to read though, so the way you did it was fitting.

I loved the interaction between Lily and James at the beginning of the story. I also loved the interaction between "Fake Lily and James". Good job with that. The dialogue between them was awesome. I'm not surprised because you're always good with character interaction and all of that.

It was warm and fuzzy and cute. Good job! =D