You did well humanizing Albel. I definitely see an improvement from your first few chapters.

great start! hope you finish this fic ^^

this chapter is awesome! lots of details to keep me hooked and i want to read more! please update A.S.A.P! keep on writin. ^-^ by the way the poems are very poetic. did u write them urself? i didn't notice any mistakes but i'll read it again since it's so good! keep up the good work!

Omg I love the story. Yep, amazing Albel actually has a good side. Lol. Yep keep up the good work. Oh yeah strange thing Chu birthday same day as mine. Yep!

I want to tell you off for writing do well! Its now 5am, and i really need sleep for the day tomorrow. Oh oh, im yawning, i never yawn. O.O

Wow, corruption... Freaky guy. I thought the fight scene was a little rushed... But that could just be personal preference. Loved it when the Crimson Scourge proves how good it really is, lol. Im like a Crimson Scourge fanboy, lol.

And of course the romance was touching. Takes thousands of written words to get albel into these situations, so you should update soon. Dont waste this good story you have.

Another great chapter! Wish this story didn't have to end, but like you said everything has to end sooner or later! Anyway it was a great chapter and a wonderful story so far! Keep it up and please update soon!

Yay they finally kissed (when Albel was sobbed)! Can't wait for more.

O.O A LOT revealed about the couples' past time, that enables them to have better understanding towards each other. Sadly, both have not happy childhood in their past :( ..

It's gonna end soon? T_T How.. Okay, let it be then, but I'll still wait for your upcoming chapters^^ Better make sure you do it, if not... *Evil smirks*... Not telling ya!!

Anyways, a nicely done chapter!! Keep it up till the end of..??!!

You have no idea how LONG I have been waiting for this...(sobbing) It was so good.

thus... you have to update soon... I know you just did, but the next chapter is coming up. :)

Ah, plz update soon, I'll be waiting by my computer for the update...

Nice Long Chapter indeed keep it up.

Sorry for the late reply.. Whew!! A long chapter, and I didn't seem to realise a-good-25-minutes had passed after I have finished reading this chapter.. As if I have burried my head into the monitor while reading ^^.

Took you long enough, but the outcome worth the wait. :) So, Albel and Krysta is getting closer, aided by some "accidents" along their journey.. Krysta is so forgiving, even though Albel have done many things that hurt her feelings (She must be some sort of saint or angel ;D ) I admire her strength...

Well, best wishes and good luck in your summer class!!

Really cute chapter. Can't wait for more.

Yay! Another chapter! I like this story, and i notice it has slowed in pace somewhat, very good! Keep up the good work.

Krysta shook her head. “I’ll be fine. I’ll let most of it ware off before I head out.”

Typo in there. Hey, you asked. And dont you dare be giving up on this. I await more.

Long chapter = good read! I can see where and argument on the ice would have been in the plan, but it's true that these fic just seem to take a life of their own no matter what we do. It was both nice and disturbing to see Albel revert back to his 'old' ways, but some changes take time and nothing can really happen over night. Krysta's reaction was exactly what I would expect. I like the end to this chapter too. I feel I'm really getting a good grip on Krysta's personality and I can see her being forgiving, but she'll probably be a little more cautious than before (but not overly cautious).

I only found one typo :D
In this line - toward the end:
'Albel shook his head. “I’m net letting you sleep out here. Besides, I thought brothers and sisters were supposed to look out for each other, right?”'
-I think net should be not...yeah, that's another one that spell check wouldn't find. Glad I can help in fighting those evil typos. They follow me everywhere! I swear, those little buggers are persistent XD

Good luck with the summer classes! I'll probably be doing the same...maybe (haven't figured it out yet).

aw... poor Albel... although its really hard to picture him crying. this story's cool. your really good at setting a picture for people... making them see in their minds eye what is happening in the story. hope you were able to understan that and keep writing