The most admirable aspect of this fic was the dialogue. It was Olde Englsih, yet fashioned in a manner that was understandable. I commend you on the emotions and actions of the characters.

This is fantastic! I always thought Olivia and Sebastian's relationship was too hasty and undeveloped and that their storyline was unresolved, and you've just continued and explained it beautifully. Well done.

I agree with tamaraface. I thought it was lovely, moving. I would encourage you, (to sate my hunger for fiction such as this, yes I am a glutton. :p) to produce some sort of continuation, how I'd love to read more concerning the relationship of olivia and viola. Beautifully written.

So I had tried to review this story before and it hadn't worked. I must say that this piece was completely enthralling. I was very impressed with the success you had emulating Shakespeare's words and the ease with which you did so. It never sounded pompous or inflated, only profound and honest. I love this movie and this play so I was very pleased with the job you did. I can't get over how succinct and emotive your syntax was, very well done.

Sadly enough, I bet that's what'd happen to Olivia. Though I do wish we could see what Viola would say when she left...very nice!