Great story. it's nice to see the cute bumbling idiot side of ash in a fic. You don't get to se it too much in the series... he's too busy surviving;) Lol. Keep writing!

Nice Story. I didn't mind the lack of Gore and violence. Also it was nice to see that human side of Ash. That side isn't explored that much. The times that I have seen that was in Evil Dead II When he was getting ready to saw Linda's head in half. The pain and horror of that moment. Later in Army of Darkness when he met Shelia there was another small sign of his human nature. Still it is very nice to see him as a man and not as an action hero. After all Ash isn't a hero. He is more of an antihero. A person that is a hero but doesn't want to be. Instead he ends up being caught up in differnt things and it makes him the hero. Anyway I am rambling. Great Story. Please write another. Thanks.

That was really really cool. I don't know what more I could say. But I'll try anyhow, haha. That had a good amount of drama, and held my attention throughout. Ummm... Yeah, ha, I'll stop now. GOOD!

Wow. Amazing. Simply amazing. *Worships*

EXCELLENT piece of work, my friend. It's not funny and/or violent- Staples of Evil Dead-ish stuff, but it doesn't have to be. You make Ash human- more than just a one-liner spouting action figure. Kudos to you, I hope you write more :)

The G rating was the only thing that caught my attention, and I'm realy glad it

did. That was an amazing story. I could see it happening. Sure Ash was a jerk,

but I'm sure he would have done that. My congradulations on writing the best

Evil Dead story I've read, and not having any action in it. Which is somthing I

would have thought impossible unless I saw it with my own eyes.

Very good. Very much so. I think you should write a story in her POV where she has a child by him and he finds out that his ancestor was her son/daughter and he is her family.

this was a nice one.. i figure if Ash ever got emotional, those are the words he would say, and that is what he would do. Damn, i almost got a tear in my eye and a lump in my throat ;)

nice... Oh yeah, you assumed right.(you know what Im talking about)