Very nicely put together! I stink at writing poetry but you do very well! Keep up the good work!

Beautiful. It is such a remarkable difference between Qui-Gon and Obi-Wan's relationship as Master and Padawan and Obi-Wan and Anakin's. I like that you captured Obi-Wan's deep respect for Qui-Gon, and the father/son relationship that they had.

"Despite our unshared blood,

Running through separate veins,

There was not a time that I doubted,

Of you as a father,"

Was such a beautiful verse. I really enjoyed this poem, and I definitely think you should keep writing them. :) Great job.

Love it. Very good job.

OH WOW! This is really good! I am impressed!