...meanie. your cliff hanger has gone on long enough!! UPDATE DAMN YOU!

Yay! Cool story! XD

Ok now i have to know what happens next.
this is good

I never saw the movie, Cast Away, before, but I like your fic. I can't wait to see what else happens

Please update! SOON! PLEASE! I WAN'T TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS!

Good start! Only thing I would like to see is a little more emotion and/or thoughts. But it's interesting so keep going :D

Good idea for a story. I loved that movie. I drew a hand on this tennis ball and named it Wilson in honor of the real Wilson.

Anywho, a little advice here is to not put so many author notes in your story. They interrupt the flow of the story. Otherwise, you're off to a good start.

Peace out.