this is a nicely written story. best one i've read today.

hahahahaha i sound like simon from american idol.

This is such a COL story! I really love the way Rilo is to Sasuke and her cool tomboy attitude! Plz update soon!

lolz!

so funny!

the girl is like Edward in Fullmetal Alchemist!

but very funny!

don't you think it is a little unfair that sasuke is getting his ass kicked by her.

at least let him win sometime.

update soon!

yay

hehehe...this is really good only spotted 1 mistake anywayz...though i really don't know how u could actually rewrite 23 chappies...I FEEL SO SORRY THE STORY WAS SO GOD! :3 well good luk with it and I CANT WAIT 2 C WAT HAPPENS HOW *SHE* (dont wanna giv anything away 2 ppl who havnt read it yet...) DISAPPEARED AT THE CARNIVAL...anywayz good stuff!