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Reviews for: Hakkai's Surprise
Carrot The LuvMachine
2008-01-09 . chapter 10
omg, Rian-chan! That was beautiful! I'm seriously almost crying! I need to read the sequel to this!
I loved the storks (especially Jihira)! They fit into it very well! I'm disappointed that Sanzo and Goku didn't find out about Kanan-chan though .-_-. cause Goku would have been so willing to help and be an onii-chan to her...but I'm sure you had your reasons for it!
The humor you slipped into this story was so adorable and funny! I loved the garden reference, and the faking of Hakkai's death. Brilliant, my dear, simply brilliant!
I'm off to read the sequel!!

~Colie-chan ^^
Repentless Wind
2006-08-17 . chapter 10
OMG! Your story is so awesome! I couldn't stop reading, so I read it all in one night. I thought it was cute and funny, but the ending kind of made me sad. My favorite character is Hakkai, so it just made the story all the better with him being your main character. And his daughter is just so adorable! I can't wait to start reading your sequel! I so want to find out what happens next.

Repentless Wind
xDarkxMousyx
2006-04-12 . chapter 8
Bravo... cant wait to see what happens next!
september rain907
2006-03-23 . chapter 5
Another great chappie! I admit they're really OOC, but with a nice reason. ^.^

Just curious: So do Sanzo and Goku know that Hakkai's pregnant now that his belly's showing? ^.^
xDarkxMousyx
2006-03-22 . chapter 5
CONTINUE! CONTINUE! ME WANT TO READ MORE! lol.. I think I just sounded like a cave man there.. lol... please continue! I love this story!
september rain907
2006-03-18 . chapter 4
Wow. This story's very good, I've never seen anything like it (yet). Please update soon! ^_^
Black 'C'
2006-03-07 . chapter 2
So far it's a good story. Please continue on this story. I want to know what Hakkai will do with the child, if he happens to decide on keeping it.
xDarkxMousyx
2006-02-28 . chapter 2
Great! So this is taking place before they all met? I can deal with that... You have to update soon... this is really good!

xDarkxMousyx
banspsychogal
2006-02-22 . chapter 1
More? *whine, whimper, beg* Please? I wanna see where this goes! Mostly I'm anxious to see Gojyo's reaction ^_~ It's a great begining... a little short though ^_^ Need more please!!
xDarkxMousyx
2006-02-21 . chapter 1
YAY.. finally another Saiyuki mpreg.. yeah I know how you feel... I was gonna start writing a mpreg soon because I was sad at the fact that there are so few Saiyuki mpregs.. I think I may still write it.. idk.. GREAT JOB THOUGH.. loved the first chapter.. you need to keep going.. Me likey! lol..

xDarkxMousyx
Inu Sakura-Chan
2006-02-20 . chapter 1
Hi, I'm Sakura Yasha! This is my first time reading a M-preg fic. Could you plaese update A.S.A.P. But don't fell like i'm rushing you threw, I know the horror of being an Fanfic writter.

Bye, Bye.
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