hehe.. thats a cute one =D... poor Demmy.. such an angsty bot he was, but things turned out ok for him in the end...

This was a really cute story.

Oh, I jusst love this story! I love Mudflap/Demolisher! He is my fav on Cybertron. This is really go deep into his feelings about switching sides and his feelings towards the Decepticons. Hope you do a squeal to it!

Really nice work... I liked Sam's character, she was believable and had some great interaction with Demolisher. You handled Demolisher really well, too... the situation worked well and I think, given his later scene in the series with Guardshell, it all makes sense. While I know you said this is just a one-shot, I wouldn't mind seeing them show up again in later stories.