|Reviews for Deal With The Devil|
| xBUzzOFF15x 5/25/13 . chapter 13
Oh dear... this is amazing.
I have just recently been introduced to the Yu-Gi-Oh! fandom after watching YGOTAS, and strangely enough, became absolutely obssesed with Tea's character. However, I was so hardpressed to find anything of actual QUALITY. I must admit, I was sceptical about clicking, as the fear of cliche and crappy fiction was most of what I had encountered, but am glad I did. I found that it was nothing like any of the other sludge I've read. In fact, it completly blew me away.
The characterization, though Ooc for certain characters and parts, was thouroughly done and not at all irritating. You presented the Yu-Gi-Oh! cast one way, and made them dynamic throughout. Adding to the characterization is the plot line itself, which was simply spectacular. I could not keep the tears out of my eyes at Tea's situation, very heart wrenching and disturbingly accurate. Every thing you created was just amazing.
I must say that your writing skills are superb. There was little to no errors when concerning grammar and punctuation and the progression was fairly well paced. Though, the beginning felt a tad bit rushed to me personally, but was otherwise steady. There could've been more imagery at parts, but that's just me being nit-picky. All and all, I give it a 10/10 for the sheer amount talent you show and how you utalize it.
Anywho, fantastic read. One of the best I've had the pleasure of reading when it comes to Azureshipping(Now if only you could write a Thornshipping pairing then my life would be complete). I cannot wait to read some of your other fics. Good luck with future projects!
| crazymel2008 5/9/13 . chapter 1
| Good Story 4/19/13 . chapter 13
The ending is very sad, but it fits for them, especially Seto. The way he treats her and all, it seems hard to actually think Tea could forgive and forgive forever. I think a person has to have a lot of patience to forgive forever. Anyways, good story, really realistic! (:
| Z Angel-chan 3/4/13 . chapter 13
The best Azureshipping story I have ever read :D. I am a big bookwoorm and a sucker for romance novels and any kinds of books that interest me :P. I fel so much for Tea/Anzu it was like I was reading an actual novel. I myself am writing a book and based off of my own fantasy world and would love to add a few characteristics from Seto's behaviour to one of my own characters. I have read many fanfics and there are obly a few of them that actually catch my attention. This one is my all time favourite and another one of a sasusaku fanfic which I read a few months ago. Seto's behaviour reminds me so much of Sasuke's behaviour in the parallel universe towards Sakura but the real Sasuke treats the real Sakura much better than the parallel univers Sasuke. Well I just wanted to praise you on writing such a good fanfic and I don't normally read an angst type fanfic but this one had me hooked. If YU-GI-OH didn't exist this would be a great short novel. Keep up the good work (_).
| Rebecca 12/26/12 . chapter 13
Best ever. Love it!
| La Nuit Noire 11/14/12 . chapter 13
Thanks goodness they didn't end up living together, happily ever after. That would've just been wrong. Their deaths surprised me. I thought maybe Tea would escape and he'd pay for his crimes and work on himself, but I guess I can see how all of this would end in death. Interesting story, great job.
| Guest 7/8/12 . chapter 13
uhh...i don't know about the ending. i was hoping seto would be locked up for all the crap he put tea through. I felt like you should've said something about how through death she was finally free of seto. But this is your story so i have no right to complain.
| Pancake030 6/27/12 . chapter 13
This was amazing. The ending fit so well with it's tragic turns and bringing Seto and tea both to rest in each others arms seemed so...right! I cried!
| xXxSaiyanPrincessxXx 5/7/12 . chapter 13
This was great, I definitely was not expecting that ending. The biggest problem I have with this story however, is all of the grammatical mistakes. It made the flow of the story bumpy.
| RandomCitizen 4/2/12 . chapter 13
SIGH...I am SO bummed out right now...:/
| Guest 12/20/11 . chapter 8
omg... how i cringe whenever i read tea and seto together, espcially when they are getting intimate with each other. Cuz I'll never know if seto will slap tea and abuse her
this is really something different that i have ever wait for the chapters i will be reading.
| animechick999 9/11/11 . chapter 13
I just would like to say that I find this story very disturbing. You had my stomach in knots. It was a wonderful read though, I read all 13 chapters in 4 hours! Hats off to you! Great work! :)
| Bishoppe 7/23/11 . chapter 13
This is, no doubt, your best work. The portrayal of Kaiba as an abusive boyfriend seemed a little strange at first, but you made it very believable with the whole autophobia thing. You have an excellent knack for writing with emotion and you made me actually feel fear for Tea as the story progresses. Hats off to you (;
| DramaQueen95 7/21/11 . chapter 13
This is like my third time rereading this story and it seems to get better and better every time I read it! Your writing skills are amazing and your portrayal of Seto and Tea is amazing. I never would have associated autophobia with Seto. It's amazing how you pulled psychology into your story as well, lolz. Amazing story!
| HoodedAngel 7/6/11 . chapter 13
Such a well written story! I absolutely loved reading this! Well with the exception of Seto being so evil. I read this in one sitting, I just couldn't put it down. Thank you!