Very good story, however you are a RENT-HEAD. In chapter 4 and the end of chapter three Rent lines are clearly quoted. While I do admire you for integrating Rent into the Firefly story line, it does not work for me. I'm too confused with Rent songs running through my head that I miss some emotion within the story.

P.S. Your story "Thunder" was Excellent!

DUDE! AWESOME RENT references...very good writings! Keep up the good work!

I'm such a Z/W shipper... I bawled through the movie when--well, you know. Now to read how they got together is making me cry all over again. ;_;