Genius.

Pahaha good job.

I think this is the best story you've done so far. Some of your lines get stuck in my head like song lyrics, so props for that. I had to look up quite a few words near the end, and I didn't quite understand the bits about fingernails or most of the second last paragraph, but I guess that's because of my own denseness and nothing you did wrong. Anyway, great job.

I swear I've read this story about a hundred times. You have an incredible way with words that I would be so happy to have one tenth of your talent. Keep the stories flowing!

Hmm... not a question I can see House ever asking really, he's too concerned with staving off the end to dwell on what that end would be. I've always thought it a great tragedy that all the doctors of this show are so scared shitless of dying- but I guess that's most people really.
I supposed in the event that House did start contemplating Eliot and the great whisper at the end, it might go seomthing like this. I suppose if he asked all of his colleagues that question they'd brush him off but it'd be interesting to see what kind of answer he could force out of them.

Hey, I know that poem! I was going to use it in a fanfic, but you beat me to it. =(
Aamzing, amazing stuff. As always. =)

Beautiful. Truly a masterpiece, in my opinion. I don't throw those words around, so believe me when I say I think your story is one. I especially loved the scene between House, Foreman and his friend.

Okay. I can't say this is your best, because all your stories are excellent and there's no way I can compare them. They're all great in their own way.

Great job.

Beautiful. Love your use of the present tense. Great job as always!:)

This was amazing. Very, very deep and incredibly good. Everyone was in character and I particularly enjoyed Cuddy's bit. Excellent job.

Wow. That was brilliant. Thoughtful, well-written, kinda obscure... and I like that about it - that you don't feel the need to explain everything. A lovely, intruiging fic.

oh my god!
this fic is great, it really got me thinking!
way to go.

very interesting and well-written i particularly like the line "God bites the dead cells and gains hangnails for it—easier to keep clean nails when one’s tempting the faithful." Nice Job.

SOMEONE's been brushing up on their Earth Science, haven't they? :D (Most. Boring. Class. Ever.)

Ok, wow. You are an absolutely amazing writer. The characterizations are perfect. It was so...*in funk* with the show that Cuddy be the only one to directly answer House. And I love how everyone else just annoyingly brushes him off.

I love how you write in the present tense. A lot of authors try (and fail) at it, but you do it beautifully. The only problem is--and this might be purely stylistic or I just read it wrong--is this sentence...The sky WILL fall like Pluto’s does…the atmosphere will freeze and all in pieces to the ground. He WAITS for Heaven-sent signs.

You switched tenses there. Or did you mean that now he's waiting for signs? Ok, I think I get what you meant. Or not...:D

One of your best stories, I think. Can't wait for the next one!

*Sings praises*