Great job! :)

aw i luv it Sunny iz amazin i luv luv luv it :) luv it:) it rlly rll y good :D

this was very good ) i liked it.

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I like seeing Sunny's softer side.

I don't see it that often, but it gives me something of a warm feeling to see him doing something other than being vain or beating up his fellow mechs, Decepticon or otherwise.

For some reason, I see a lot of Sunstreaker in myself.

We both put up these hard, unapproachable barriers, especially when we're scared or hurt or just plain sad, but inside there's that little bit of soft down feather, where the caring and love reside.

I'm just a tad bit more, eh, expressive.

Woah... That one was really beautiful, thanks for sharing!

A great examination of Sunstreaker's artistic side, something that hasn't been explored in the mainstream continuity and I wanted to write about too. When I wasn't in the mood to write my own first twin story I would often reread this one just to get my self in the mood to write the next chapter. So thanks for the unoficial encouragement. :-) I'm glad Sunny gave Prowl the picture, a subtle yet sweet "peace offering."

If you like Jazz and twin fics you'll love mine.

I tlly love this.

pure brilliance.

Wonderful perspective on the supposedly 'meanest' of the Autobots. It’s interesting to note that unlike most people, your Sunny seems to be the kind of person with whom you must earn friendship; in this case, through kindness in turn. And it’s only friends that Sunstreaker will trust with the knowledge of his artistic ability...

very nice!

aw, that good i loved reading it! _

I always thought Sunstreaker was a good artist, but this story now makes me think he's a master. I could imagine the image of what had occured in the brig, on that paper and what the others were there for.

Nice to think, that when you're in trouble, that you can still rely on friends. I love the description, especially that for the artpiece, and I think the story ended on a really nice, Warm-And-Fuzzy-Feelings note.

Do keep it up! Favourites!

That's beautiful. Brig time wasn't so bad this time around with the picture to occupy him (us). Love the simplicity and symbolism - very well done. :)

I'm so glad you managed to finish this one. I love the symbolism in each of the pictures. Try as he might to be big and bad all the time, ol' Sunshine does have a few soft spots.

Cliffjumper should consider himself lucky. Most people would slag him for acting like that at 3AM. Not like he wasn't warned. Signature mauling indeed. *giggle* Sunstreaker is a hard character for most people to write about but you did him justice.

Like I said before, beautiful work! I quite liked the little detail of Sunstreaker having a signature mauling, and Cliffjumper really had it coming to him. Annoying lone Lambos is a Very Bad Idea