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misselizbethprice
2006-07-12 . chapter 6
I must admit that I am guilty of often reading, but rarely reviewing stories. I have to tell you though, that I love the unique character of your stories. The relationships over time and the backplot of the war that is ever present yet far away... I love how you write Severus, he is by far my favorite character and you illustrate him to perfection. His intimacy with Harry and his professionalism--I have a deep respect for your writing and the places it takes me. Thank you.
mac
Rasleigh
2006-04-10 . chapter 6
wonderful story and character development. I look forward to any other installments to the series.
katy
2006-04-10 . chapter 6
Excellent chapter. I didn't mean to criticize your mistake. I love your writing and always eagerly await more (look humble)!
kathy
2006-04-09 . chapter 6
Your chapter 6 is the same as chapter 5. Did I miss something. I am looking forward to reading your updates. Only one other author writes on the same caliber as you.
I Got Tired of Waiting
2006-04-09 . chapter 1
To all those who would use this venue to tell me that Part VI is wrong:

Just be patient; I screwed up when I posted the chapter and have since fixed it, but the revision not showing yet on the site. I am so sorry for any inconvience this may cause. The story is also posted at my site and Skyehawke, so you could read it there if you're so inclined. Thanks--IGToW
Jimbocous
2006-04-08 . chapter 5
Spectacular story acr so far. Thanks for several great reads!
*doubleheart*
2006-03-22 . chapter 5
Oh goodness! I adore this fic!! You are so delightfully creative! :) ...and your writing is such a nice change! Thank you so much for your fanfiction. Please update soon! I'm on tenterhooks! ^o^v
Silverthreads
2006-03-20 . chapter 5
Very compelling story.
riantlykalopsic
2006-03-12 . chapter 4
aw!! very sweet, they'll work it out!
katy
2006-03-06 . chapter 3
Excellent chapter! I haven't read your other stories, yet; but this makes me want to seek them out to know the background.
riantlykalopsic
2006-03-06 . chapter 3
e!! what a way to end it! wow! that was a really emotional scene! i wonder what severus will say to harry when he gets out of it
Kristin
2006-02-28 . chapter 2
Intriguing chapter. Not what I expected at all (I thought the gobbelworm warning was a joke, for one thing...). I like Saganth, though of course I miss Horatio. I guess snakes don't live all that long, though. Thanks for continuing this story!
lorelei
2006-02-27 . chapter 2
Awesome story. How unique. I can't wait for it to be continued!
Jeni
2006-02-27 . chapter 2
Oh boy. What a way to go down memory lane with someone else's memories. I am hoping for a bit of violence from Harry towards Stenman and Colch. Evil men don't deserve to be around people in general.

So what shall happen next? Will Harry succeed in this strange and stressful rescue? Will the baby live? Or will Stenman and Colch betray him and the baby lives not at all?
empathic siren
2006-02-21 . chapter 1
I have enjoyed nearly everything you have written in this universe, but this new work just hits all of my buttons. I really like the way you've chosen to construct it and am already intrigued by the mysteries of Harry's past and what brought him and Severus to such a point that Harry felt the need (or was forced to) disappear. I have a feeling there will be much angst in this and I can't wait--you do it so very, very well.
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