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| HoneyFlavoredPocky 2006-11-02 ch 5, | abusehm...that's actually really good. it's sweet and simple. is english like a second language? if so, then you're really good at it:D keep up the good work. baix |
| smithyfan 2006-10-24 ch 5, | abuseYou should carry on this fic it could be really good if you continue. I'd get myslef a beta though if I were you, the grammar isn't very good, i'm guessig english isn't your first language? Any way well done on this chap! x |
| imakeeper 2006-04-03 ch 5, | abusenice! |
| smithyfan 2006-03-28 ch 4, | abuseplz add to this fic id like to know where ure gonna tek it!! xx |
| skinnyrita 2006-03-23 ch 4, | abusehm. i like this so far and will put it on my alerts hoping you will update it soon, but you really need to work on your english and grammar it's all just too disaterous to be bourne, okay? |
| Jeko2204 2006-03-18 ch 4, | abuseits a very good story so far cnt wait 4 more chapters |
| imakeeper 2006-03-17 ch 4, | abusenice sugar coated fluff |
| imakeeper 2006-03-17 ch 3, | abuseuhoh... |
| Fasolasi 2006-03-09 ch 4, | abuseI´m a real fan of your story and I can belive I´m the first one to write you a review. Sorry if my English is bad,but I couldn´t restist to tell you that I hope that your story is goig on soon. I´m waiting for the next capitel. |