jesus! :'( that made me cry!

oh my god what a weeper! i love how van wanted hitomi to live in the end but still.. I can't believe u killed him:( What an ironic title 4 this story im crying. U can't just leave it like that i feel its so incomplete dere has to b a happy ending where dere together! I hope u'll continue this story even if its years later. Keep up the good work! xx

WOW

that was absolutly amazing.

sad, but great

thank you for sharing

hug

jacks-peapod

oh...

it was so sweet but at the same time so sad...

THAT WAS SO SAD!

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ASHLEY

Van is an idiot. Why didn't he just wish to be healed? Anyhow, nice story. Though now I feel like hitting Van over the head.

HOW DARE YOU WRITE SOMETHING SO HORRBLE? Why not have Hitomi use the pendent to take Van to the mistic moon to save him? Why did he have to die? *sob* Why *sob* couldn't *sob* Hitomi *sob* be with him? *cry hard* E-mail me and let me know.

NO NO NO NO WHY WHY WHY WHY ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! *CRIES*

! *sniffle* Oh, that was sssooo sad! *sniffle, sniffle* Van died? NNNOOOO! That was unfair!

*tears begine to swell* aaawwww! And you just end it right there? How can you? It's ssoo sad, and Van and Hitomi don't even end up happily together! *spouts fountains* WAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHH! *sniffle* Okay, I know that you said that this was Romance/Angst and a one shot, but if you don't mind, I wish that it could end up in a happier ending. . . . . I mean, you kind of feel incomplete when Van and Hitomi don't end up together at the end, don't you? That's why you wrote fics from the start, to make Van and Hitomi complete their unfinished romance! _; I mean, it's only logical that-

Hitomi: eunc, quit boring her to death!

eunc: What? I'm just trying to get her to finish this on a more complete ending!

Van: didn't you read the fine print in the beginning? she said that this was a one shot!

eunc: THAT'S WHAT I'M TRYING TO DO! I'M TRYING TO CONVINCE HER TO WRITE MORE! *grumbles* great, the couple is ganging up on me. . . .

Hitomi and Van: *sweatdrops and sighs* you'll never learn, will you?

eunc: *gives Hitomi and Van glare and rasberry* hey, I never said that I'll learn, I just said that I want to see more of this! And this would have never started if you two had just STAYED together at the end of the series!

Hitomi and Van: *blush* IT'S NOT OUR FAULTS!

*sighs* anyway, please, if you don't want to post it up or anything, I'll understand. You just have to understand me though. I had to try. I just had to try. *grins* After all, you are an awesome writer! _ All right, I'll quit ranting in your face and go back to my sad, sad writing (compared to yours, of course). -_-;

Anyway, I hope you happy writing! Ja ne! _*

Ow! ::sob:: It was so sad and I like it!

sniff* that's soo sad...but a beautifully written fic thou...

Ah! That is sad! Poor Hitomi...

So sad...yet it made perfect sense and was beautifully written

*crying* WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH! NOT VAN! NOT VAN! *sniffles* THat was good...Very good...*hugs her Van plushie as all of her other Anime/videoGame plushies look at her jealously*

[sniifffff] that was...so sad...i luv it..make a sequel