I would really like if you'd update. I like this story, and your way of writing.

Well, I like this one too! I admit, I prefer your other one, but this has potential. You're a pretty good writer; so please do keep on doing that.

please update :)

AWW! I wish you would update your stories already T_T Please update!! Please? I love how Naruto and Sasuke are in this story. While reading a new story that I would like to write came to mind and I am dedicating it to you. Wish me luck! :)

not to be rude or anything but a lot of people make this mistake so I just want to help you break the habit while you can.


"than what I usually right"

write is for writing poetry and stories.

right is for your left hand and the right way of passage.

Any ways I noticed tyhe 'temporary hiatus' I would suggest having Naruto and Sasuke meet again at market when Sakura and Ino go to see Sasuke and celebrate his return. Maybe Naruto could be holding their bought goods or something. Just a suggestion.

Whoo! This is getting juicy! Please continue this!

Beans

hmm i don't know why, but i love fanfiction spin-offs of "cinderella" for some reason.. and I'm really looking forward to read more of this. naruto is really interesting and sasuke is as sexy as ever! the smirking smexy bastard. *sigh*
hope you update soon! =)

;_; I love this story so much but its been hiatus so long

Love it~! Kind of disappointed to see there isn't a next chapter and the last update was about 2 years prior.. I would really like to see where you planned to take this plot, it would be a great shame to let it go to waste. Please continue on with this story. ^-^

Great story. I'm enjoying the interactions between Naruto and Sasuke. ^^ I hope you don't discontinue this piece - I'm interested to see what'll happen next.

Aw, this was such a cute story! I'm sad you didn't get too far, but I hope you might continue this someday.

omg! this is the best fanfiction rendition of cinderella i've ever read so far! do continue the story! update plz?

This story of yours is really interesting... Though on temp hiatus, uh?

I hope you will find the time/inspiration you need for another chapter! Thanks for sharing!

Wow... not bad! I liked it!!
Keep up the good work!!

The ovverall story is pretty good and sounds really cute.