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| babyb26 2006-02-28 ch 1,  | abuseWow that makes more sense. Good work. |
| Gabbeh 2006-02-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseI must agree with the booklord. Too many love, lovely, etc... Other than that, this was incredibly cute. :0 Slighty short, but cute. |
| thebooklord 2006-02-20 ch 1, | abuseI MUST SAY SOMETHING! There is WAY too much use of love, lovely, loving, lover... 13 in total. 13 out of 211. And I didn't see any other synoynyms. Just read through it and you'll see what i mean. |
| SunRise19 2006-02-20 ch 1, | abuseNice, but I told you what I think in the im |