Aw, that was GREAT! I hope you update sometime soon. It's such a fun story to read - especially with Misao being her usual, awkward, clumsy self. Nice work. I really enjoyed it! ^_^

Happy Birthday :)
haha I LOVE YOUR STORY
thanks for updating, id like to read more

hahaha project stalker :D
i like your story but can you update any time soon? :D
thankss! i want to see what happens between Soujiro and Misao

Aa, sorry for not reviewing for the earlier chapters, but I guess I just got caught up... Gomen, gomen.

I like how you wrote everyone, it's very interesting. I especially like how you wrote Soujirou and Misao. Haha.

Waiting patiently for your next chapter,

Free Hero

nice story! ;)

hahahaha i loved this it was sso funny. make sure 2 write the next one! shed better end up with sou chan not aoshi i hate those fics where she starts out with sou then ands with aoshi. I love this lol
keep writing. (and just to let u know sou-chan is obsessed with candy so that could come in somewhere)

nice story then
I hope you would update more sooner

I love it, update soon love!

Misao can't fall for him so fast right?^^

very nice chpater, you should write more.
this is certainly a nice experience for both of them

cute chapter, I can't ask more for it cuz' everyone has their own life, try your best! ;

Let me just say that the story itself isn't really all that original, but I don't really mean that in a bad way. As long as you keep the characters true to their selves, I would even read the most cliched story in the world. Luckily, you manage to do that. Misao drives on emotion, and you see her switching moods pretty quickly. Soujiro is another matter, seeing as this is an AU story. He would have more emotion in your story than he does in the series, because you have ereased his sad past which pretty much made him the 'Fake Smile' type (not saying that the past you have given him, isn't sad). So, if you think Soujiro is OOC, it's only naturally in your story.

Your style of writing doesn't leave much room for the dialouge, which I am disappointed in. Exchange of words between the characters is the most important thing you can have in a fanfic. It's not bad that you have so many detailed discriptions of their actions - not at all! In fact, I like it; not many around here do that nodaways. But after reading so many lines (you should sometimes add in a ; or a - which makes for easier reading) of descriptions, you start to wonder when they will start to talk. If you could add in more dialouge, your story would be much better to read and enjoy.

I wonder how you'll write the next chapter if you take my advice of adding more dialouge. This is one story I want to read the end of.

And besides, I like stories titled with only two words ;)

U...~u~
write more or go'in hell with mehh~

hehehhehheheehehe cool
-Mandella-sama

you know how ta use guitar?that's COOL!XD
anyway,dun forget about the fic, I just want my Sou*blush*