Definetely! Reviews are comming, as long as you promise to update the story!

So... to start with Nephrite... Well... He DESERVES it! All the fun of cooking a cake for 500 people... and all alone, without help! If I had been Minako, I would just leave him to do his job for all the trouble he cause her! *evil laugh*

Indeed the world is ending for Jadeite, because Rei apologized... Actually, I think it probably started ending for him the moment she spoke... Or the moment she started suspecting that he wasn't from Mars... :P

Kunzite and Minako... Stubborn pair I must say, or actually Kunzite is probably more stubborn than she is... We can understand why Minako is that way, because of Ace and everything, but what about Kunzite...? Did he have some kind of heart break in the past..? Oh, and if Minako needs training, what about other Senshi? Who trains them?

I really wasn't expecting Zoisite to make a move FIRST out of all Generals, but hey! He needs to be first in something too! Go, Zoi!! That's all I can say.

I'm definetely looking forward to more interaction between Haruka and Endimion.. I can just see them sitting at the bar (or whatever awailable at the Moon Palace) and talking about how they don't understand women... And maybe then, Haruka can finally get the idea in her head that Endimion is GOOD for Serenity, and start scaring Seiya instead... Yeah, the look on all their faces probably gonna be priceless! :P

it's ben way too long since the last update, so i guess i'll have to thank the one that pushed you into updating :P

as to the chappie, SUGOI
i'm glad to see Michiru finally making an appearence (i AM one of her fans :P)

impatiently waiting for the next update,
The One

ohh poor darien, poor serena. they're meant to be. he knows who she is and but if only she knew who he was. then uranus wouldn't be able to treat him so badly and they could be together. but i'm wondering how venus found out that darien was prince endymion. please update soon, and if you wouldn't min, tell me how she found out.

What about other three girls and their men.

Update please.

Yay, an update ^^...this is brilliant!
What a cute Ami/Zoicite moment...I do love that pairing so much ^^
And it's upsetting about Serena and Darien...but they'll get back together in the end...so I'll just have to wait patiently for another update...
Update soon ^^

When things were starting to heat up.

Make chapter longer.

Love this... Update please.

Oh tension is rising...I haven't checked for sometime so I didn't realise you had a new update...>.< but yay! This is just getting better and better...but how could Haruka ruin such a beautiful set up for a romance? Lol...oh well, this sounds crazy for me cos I'm not fond of Uranus much, but in this fic...I find myself fond of her lol
Oh yeah...you're doing a great job with the language and writing of the story, but I think when you say "the blonde greeted her teeth" you meant gritted.
Please update soon ^^

Grr...authors and their wicked endings lol,anyways i really like your story and hope to see much more of it very soon!! keep it up.

ah you left ne hanging wanting to read more, please up date soon.

I liked it! I can't wait to see if Rei tries to kill Jadeite, if Mina really defeats Kuznite(sp), and if Mako tries to kill Nephrite... I await your next update.

Ja ne

oh man i got to read more i want ot hear about them hoking up. keep going plese

For someone who's first language isn't English...you're doing a marvellous job...you might even put me to shame lol ^^

Let's see now, Darien has told Serenity about his friends...doesn't that sort of mean that if she by any chance saw them around the palace...she'd know who they were?
And the other girls, Rei, Amy and Mina seem to have suspicions about the guys they met...and I love the idea of having Makoto and Nephrite cooking rivals.
Yay...more Zoicite..I do so love him ^^ and I love his personality...he comes alive
Oh well update soon...I'm guessing that there are sitll several little secrets and unpredictable small plotlines to come...and look forward to it.

First of all, I like it, no I LOVED it!

Now, the line: "but unlike all other blondes, she wasn’t quite a ditz and was thought even to be very considerate, with impeccable lady-like gestures and reactions", I think is pretty assumptious, unless, of course, in SailorMoon universe ALL blondes are ditzes. Or unless Kunzite thinks ALL blondes are ditzes. I also like how Mina and Kunzite have different personalities, yes, they are both leaders, but still, Minako is not as cold and stoic as he is during her 'normal' time (aka, not being a senshi)

For other, I think Mars would have suspected big time that Jadeite is NOT from Mars, unless of course she was blinded by her anger because he was late... I'm kinda biased here, because SailorMars is my favorite senshi(I even cosplayed as her! ), and it just makes me kinda sad that everyone always focus on her short temper. In any way I want to say that she DOESN'T have one, but still... She is also very devoted to her duty, and cares and protects Serenity.. And then depending on manga or anime, or liveaction, she is also very creative, cares about kids and other people. So, basicly the whole point of my speech here, is that I wish fanfic's authors would focus more on her other qualities, not just short temper. You might say that it's only chapter 4, and I agree, and I also see how you made her feel bad for her outburst, and that was like: Yay! Rei can feel embarased too! Oh, and about Jadeite, I think it's totally understood that he HAS to act calm and everything, after all, I'm assuming that he is helping Rei, and not training her like Kunzite is training Minako. So she is in higher rank than he is. Anyway, I'm totally looking forvard to seeing how their relationship progress! Oh, and another thing, it was so mean to put Yuichiro in there! :P After all we ALL know how much he likes Rei, but he won't get her of course... Right? *cries for Yuichiro and then goes off to find her own Jadeite to escort her to AWA convention ball where she is going to be Princess Mars*

Yay for Nephrite!! I wonder if he can cook.. *evil laugh* I don't really know what else to say, but that's entirely because I like everything just the way it is!! Yay to Misterious Adviser!!

Yay to Zoisite too, he is acting like a total gentleman! But then again, wouldn't Ami, with all her reasoning power at least start to suspect that he is NOT from Mercury.. Or was she too blinded by his beautiful eyes to even think about that... *wonders quietly staring at the monitor...* I'm looking forward to him sneaking around, trying to read some of the books. And then totally refusing to leave the Moon because he haven't finished reading some of them.. *evil grin* I'm sorry, I'm getting carried away here, maybe I should write my own fanfiction...?

Back to review now. Yay to Endimion! He is NOT fighting with Serenity. That is so refreshing after all those fanfictions where it's a rule for them to fight! And the fact that he has to hide from Haruka just makes me laugh nonstop! He is totally bossed around by all girls, which is another hilarious thing. I think he deserves some change of his enviromet after being a prince... Maybe he can find some job in the palace too... Like... being Earth history tutor, or gardener.. given of course that he will be able to escape Haruka and that Makoto and Rei won't kill him for 'doing anything to Serenity'. But anyway, I'm getting carried away again, so I think I'm going to end here.

*patiently waits for next chapter*

Tireen

aw love bloomes between the people. i like it

this is real cool. why did endymion say he was darien? guess i'll keep reading