 Gogo-chan 2006-02-21 . chapter 1I absolutely loved it. I really liked the overall progression of it, and Roy and Ed's interactions. The writing style is beautiful, and I think you've got both of their characters down perfectly. I also like the fact that you captured both parts of their nature, "adult" and "child".
This is actually the first gift-fic I've gotten, so it'll have a special place in my heart! Lots of love for you~!
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