 dragonlilly1993 2009-10-30 . chapter 4haha great ending to the chapter! grr hate cliff hangers! U BETTER KEEP GOING WITH THIS STORY! GREAT CHAPTER I LOVE IT! THIS STORY IS SO BLOODY FANTASTIC! I CANT WAIT TO READ WHAT HAPPENS NEXT! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE I'M BEGGING U ON MY HANDS ANDN KNEES TO MAKE MORE CHAPTERS SOON! (pwetty pwetty pwetty please with a yummy ice cream sundae on top? *puppy eyes) I'LL BE WAITING VERY VERY VERY LONGINGLY! PLEASE DONT KEEP ME IN SUSPENCE LONG! |
 dragonlilly1993 2009-10-30 . chapter 3i just love the way u protrayed all the characters in this chapter! i love the way u desribed iruka when hes mad! he doese act just like that! hahahahaha! GREAT CHAPTER I LOVE IT! THIS STORY IS BLOODY BRILLIANT! |
 dragonlilly1993 2009-10-30 . chapter 2hm very interesting! I LOVE THIS CHAPTER ITS GREAT! THIS STORY IS ABSOLUTELY PERFECT! PLEASE DONT ABANDON THIS WONDERFUL STORY! |
 dragonlilly1993 2009-10-30 . chapter 1hm interesting! hieis here! ^^ GREAT CHAPTER I LOVE IT! |
 WingsOfFate 2009-07-21 . chapter 4I LOVE THIS STORY!
Very IC, I'm so sorry you haven't updated in a while, I hope you don't have writer's block. :( |
 inkbloter 2009-03-21 . chapter 1 hi. person that is arigatomina,recently Ive come to love this story and I hope you update soon.
- i know, writers block is a pain.
looking forward to you continuing this story |
 spiralgal 2009-01-27 . chapter 4Ahh!! I love this!! Especially the demon/mate-ish thingy. That is just so funny to see play out!! And Kyuubi putting all those images into Naruto's head! Bad Kyuubi! Bad, bad, bad!!
Can't wait to see what happens. Hope you update soon. Ja. |
 Crystal 2009-01-06 . chapter 4 Pls update soon! |
 soupcan 2008-12-20 . chapter 4Interesting... It'll be interesting to see what sort of interaction there is between Kurama and some of the other Naruto characters, considering how angry he is at the moment...
I'm enjoying the story so far! Please update soon! |
 Estrella85 2008-09-06 . chapter 4This is a really interesting (and very well written) cross-over. You've integrated the two worlds fairly well and interaction between the characters seems very smooth. Hope there's more to come soon! ^_^ |
 kitsuneluvuh 2008-09-01 . chapter 4Sweet chapter. I really like this story; I can't wait for Kurama and Kyuubi to meet, and for the shinobi to learn that Yusuke, Kurama, and Hiei actually ARE demons. :D :D I hope you update soon! |
 Youko Rayah 2008-08-29 . chapter 2*blink blink*
that has got to be one of the most original ideas for a YYH/Naruto crossover I've ever herd. the Elemental lands in the Makai? total first for me.
nice so far, I look forward to reading more! |
 Queen of the Paperclips 2008-08-28 . chapter 4I'm so happy you updated! Please do it again soon, I love your characterizations and the dynamics between characters. |
 dimonyo-anghel 2008-08-01 . chapter 4MUAHAHHA the last bit was an implication was it not? Hmm, maybe it wasn't... Thanks for the update! Will Tsunade answer the questions about the area or allow them to 'talk' with Kyuubi? Will Gaara's demon be in here? |
 darl 2008-07-27 . chapter 4I love this fic! :)
The dialogue between Kurama & Hiei in the last part sounded very much in character. I also find the whole theme involving discrimination of humans and demons in the three worlds a subject well worth exploring - I like how Kurama resents the imprisonment of one of his own kind (though I don't think Konoha had much choice according to the original story?).
Thank you! I hope we can get an update soon! :) |