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Cheese is yummy 4/18/10 . chapter 13
"sniff" "sniff" -moans and cries boisoriously again-
DuckFiend 3/2/10 . chapter 1
39 reviews, only 1 negative. Don't let the last comment dissuade you from reading. :)
BobFrapples49 3/2/10 . chapter 13
the part wtb his sister was lame. Could have been ok but it failed. Don't read this story. It ruined the franchise for me.
DP-shrine-in-closet-girl 11/15/09 . chapter 13
Wow... this has been the best ENG fanfiction I have ever read! I read a lot of Kuzco/ OC's, but never ones this good. I love Nhutalu! I love how imperfect and real she is. It was really well done how you took your time with their relationship and with the plot in general. It was a really complex and interesting story. I was never bored.

Oh, and your a genius, just to let you know. Becuase when Kuzco first told Nhutalu she was emperor, though it was really Yzma in disguise, i was upset about how easily she believed him. I was really really upset about that becuase it seemed so out of character! But then that line came... about a man not giving her flowers in many many years... and my jaw dropped open. I finally understood that she was Yzma... thats why your a genius. It was such an amazing twist! I still can't get over how well that was done. And how disgusting it was that Kuzco was kissing her.

haha i love the llama in the line up! So funny! Kuzco was really mad at Pacha for a while there. And if it hadn't been for Pacha's suggestion things would have gone differently. But Pacha's one of the only people that the Emperor could be that angry with and not be imprisoned for life or worse. Gotta love their relationship. Defiantly the best story of ENG that I have ever read! I don't know if that means anything to you anymore since you wrote this so long ago, but this is really an amazing piece of work.
Nyita7 10/16/08 . chapter 13
Oh my god. I spent four days reading this fic bit by bit... and the ending was so beautiful! I got a bit weird in the middle (I mean, Sinchi Roca? Someone's done their research...) But it was definitely the best story I've ever read on this site. Not only did it all go together, I always get really tired of skimming over mistakes in othe stories- I didn't find any here! You did amazingly.

You definitely put the Emperor's story back in the groove.

BRILLIANT!

Nyita7
forevermore2110 5/13/08 . chapter 13
Your story was great! Do you think that you could write a sequel? Please?
Life's Water 12/2/05 . chapter 13
WOAH!*fulls of chair* That's one of the best written 'Emperor's New Groove' fanfic that i've ever read! that was brilliant...you wrote it really well and the descriptions were awesome! but i did find it a bit disturbing that Kuzco did it with his sister...ew! but good i liked the entire story...is there gonna be a sequel? because a sequel would be really god! Please don't kill me! *whimpers* Good Job! I hope to read more of your fanfics in the future...

Blueicedragon
actress19 8/13/05 . chapter 13
i liked that story. so nice to see the emperor in love. and good job with the yzma taking nhutula's identity part. you sure fooled me. once again great job on the fic
Pink Ferret 8/23/04 . chapter 13
Aww! So cute! Even though this fic was quite long, I never got bored through any of it. Well done!
KensingtonGold 3/16/02 . chapter 13
this fic was so sweet! awwwww! :)
Battle Maid 1/3/02 . chapter 13
Gods...this was an absolutely stunning fic. Everything about it was wonderful; your fluid writing style, the representation of the characters, the character development, and the plot, which had suspense, action, romance...I could really go on and on about this excellent piece of writing, but suffice to say that it is probably one of the best pieces of writing I have ever read, and I enjoyed it immensely, and it would be a great shame if you did not continue to write. Bravo a thousand times!
Bulmis 8/31/01 . chapter 13
Uh... he did it with his sister? uigh... everything except that is WONDERFUL! I really love this fic! you write so well! I love your page too _
Melly-chan 7/25/01 . chapter 13
That was really, good I enjoyed the whole thing and I especually liked that you had actual facts and info about their civilization and traditions, it made it much more realistic. To top it all off you did a wonderful job in keeping everyone in character and adding plenty of twists and turns to keep the story interesting.
Zidane wannabe 7/18/01 . chapter 13
I cant believe that this story actually made me cry as much as it did. Good job. I give it a 10/10,a true classic.
Anti Yamato Tomboy 7/11/01 . chapter 13
How could you write for so long? It was beautiful, I love it. I wish it was mine
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