I like this, I thought you captured the relationship between Obi-Wan and Anakin quite well. Good job!

Aww, the ending to this fic was absolutely adorable. I like how we get to glimpse into the difficulties that arise between the new Master and Padawan, and how both manage to get closer from their trials. Nicely done!

Aww! That;s so cute :)

i like stories that feature a Obi-Wan and Anakin's very first experiences as new Padawan and young Master. this was an excellent story and you captured them perfectly!

Thanks for a great read!

Wow. That was great! I especially liked the flashback comparing Obi's experience with Qui-Gon to his with Anakin. Just like when Qui-Gon opened up to him, letting him see his humanity that is what Obi needed to do with Anakin. Very moving!

That's good. It was very deep and full of emotion.

Very good. I love the way you turned the mistake into a valuable learning experience for both Master and Padawan.

Thank you! finally a obi-wan story were he's not getin it on with another guy or he died.

Angel

Great story.

Liked it! Well written. Emotional.

Wow! Somebody finally portrayed post-TPM Anakin correctly! That was really good!

"I promise not to free any slaves on my way to Engineering." Lucas could've used something that funny in HIS script! Thanks for the story, it was a lot of fun with some nice foreshadowing. I hope to learn a lot about Obi-Wan in the next movie.

An artistic tour-de-force! I loved this story more than my own life!

I enjoyed it. It would take time for the two to trust one another. I think that Anakin's thoughts are never far from his mother, so I like how that was brought up in this story.

Convincing characterization. The end is lovely!