Evanescence, oh my god. This chapter was made of special win. I loved Manx and Ken conspiring, I'm always waiting for their interaction. Hands down, my favorite part of the whole fanfic. Not that it isn't amusing the way it is, but the idea of Manx and Ken working together is just... I don't know, I really like it.

Please give us more of this story! The only trouble is it reconciles us to Mary Sues

WOW This was good XD! I wonder when the others are gonna see behind her disgusie ^ ^

WOW!
Poor Ken, he's the only one with any real senses left...
So...who is the mysterious Rain?
I guess I'll have to read on to find out...:D

I lol'd. My favorite part was Manx's argument about Weiss working with Rain, I can definitly see her thinking of them as a pack of kids with leathel weapons. It really helps define her as a mother figure and makes her motivations for helping Ken a little more personable.

Please tell me Ken will get the chance to gut that little twit. Pretty please with a cherry on top?

I honestly need to say that your story irks me. The Rain girl is enerving to say the least, and that's exactly the purpose with the MarySue parody. I hate MS, I don't read stories with them and that's exactly why I read this fic, because I know I'll see her painful end after all the agony she's making dear Ken-kun go through.
I thank you for being one of the few Ken/Yohji shippers still in activity and for being one with real talent to portray Weiss guys so well. Keep up the great work and have a Happy New Year!

I'm so happy to see another chapter! I thought this was permanently in hiatus somehow... But I'm glad to be wrong!!
This chapter was fantastic, I laughed a lot. I think my favorite line was Yohji on Ken being too sporty with girls to get to know them - that's a nice theory on him and Yuriko.
Also, I found myself longing for more Ken and Manx bonding. I loved their interaction!

Hey there!^^

I really really like this story and have been following it so far. I just wanted to ask, whether you plan to continue it sometime or if I should consider it a dropped project?
The last update has been half a year ago, so I thought it wouldn't hurt to ask...

Love,
misere

Birman?

You know I love you, right?

Holy FSM, you managed to use occuli, orbs, and... and something else I can't quite remember but was horribly purple, and I love Ken's Ken-ness, and oh my goodness this fic is awesome.

I'm going to go read something else you've written now, too, because now that I've finally starting reading your -fic- (how long after I started watching your badfic journal?), I can't stop. :D

*chuckles* I can't believe you actually got flamed...just ignore that, it's stupid. I wouldn't be surprised if it was copied word for word as a review to other stories.

Anyway...I somehow nearly forgot about this story, but since I had some free times at hand I searched a bit through to find anything worthwhile...and I stumbled upon this and saw...THE SIXTH CHAPTER! YAY! ^-^V

It rocks, it seriously does. The concept with the blatantly obvious disguise always bugs me, be it some movie, anime, manga or fanfiction, and your approach was really fun to read.

Rains off-topic-ranting was hilarious as ever and I'm feeling really sorry for poor Ken here. But...write more of these! Really, I nearly buckled over with laughter! Her "real" name is a good choice as well, even if I would have gone for spawn of hell or nuisance as another name...but I'm clearly prejudiced anyway.

So Youji actually got the least bit suspicious? About time! Manx as an ally is fine, but if anyone would/should mind losing Ken, it would/should be Youji, don't you agree?^^

How is she attempting to kill Ken? Driving him nuts until he commits suicide? Accidentally dropping a giant flowerpot on his head or making him slip on some spilled water and unsuspiciously breaking his neck in the process?
Aah, as much fun as that is to imagine, I bet it's going to be on a mission, huh?
Is Ken going along with it? With Manx's help he could stage his death, he's done it before anyway. Or is he going to stay and endure her?
Will Weiß mourn his loss properly? Will Youji and Ken ever get it on?

Okay...I'm rambling and probably annoying you...

Suffice it to say, I'm REALLY looking forward to the new chapter. Really, really!^-^

Just brillant - drags out every Mary-sue cliche in the book (actually, practically every movie cliche too - the hero who comes to save their friends at the last minute, the assassin who manages to kill twenty men without getting a drop of blood on their oh-so-cool leather outfit). Serenity Raven Kath’rynn Sakura Enigma Hikari Akegata (god, what supreme irony when she thinks "Ken, for God’s sake: what kind of a name was that?") has got to be one of the most annoying characters I have ever met, so you have definately achieved your goal of making the ultimate Mary-Sue.
I also loved the references to Hot Topic and Evanescence (which all the Sue writers put in to make their Sue seem SO rebellious and misunderstood, and oh-so-speshul) I have never been in Hot Topic in my life, but after seeing their clothes online I'm really glad they're not in Canada (I think). Keep writing, and I'll keep reading.

I find it highly amusing that Rain's outfits tend to have purple in them and she's always accompanied by a small army of purple prose.

Poor Ken... no one ever listens to the sane one. Loved the part where calls Omi an idiot and the lingering look at Youji. I was rather disapointed that he didn't kill her when he was talking to her after she returned from the mission. He could do it! He's an assasin! He could hide the body. He's already covered in blood anyway. Though he broke rule number one of getting rid of enimies from within. Never let them know you're onto them!

Hope to see some more chapters soon!

GO KEN!! finally the confrontation. Rain is by far one of the most annoying charcters i have a privilage of reading about. i just hope that the others will figure it out sometime. but not too soon lol!!

Poor Kenken. He can't keep his mouth shut and just can't calculate the situation first. If something's bothering him the world soon knows ^^ Oh well, still sweet as ever! I like it so update ASAP! ^^

hahaha... aya actually being NICE to someone when it isn't required... LOL... not that he's a bad guy and all... just not the doting on girls type... lol... that's more youji... ^^ but yea... great story so far and plz update soon ^^