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| aliasaddict501 2007-08-28 ch 5,  | abuseOkay, incredible. I hope you've written more stories. Hockey ** was hilarious too. I just love Weiss. So, great story. Can't wait to read more. |
| aliasaddict501 2007-08-28 ch 4, | abuseI love this story so much, its keeping me up late. But one thing: Isabel really sounds old. Like not five years old, but maybe thirteen. I know, 'five's the new fifteen' but she sounds a little too old. |
| aliasaddict501 2007-08-28 ch 3, | abuseSomething I've noticed in this chapter- because of the situation, I'm not exactly loving Will because he's in the way of Syd and Vaughn. I hate not loving Will. But good chapter. |
| aliasaddict501 2007-08-28 ch 2, | abuseSo, just finished Part 2 and I am so glad this never happened in the show, not because its so terrible but because I would absolutely be a basket case if I had to watch this. I cried enough when he was fake-dead. |
| aliasaddict501 2007-08-28 ch 1, | abuseJust finished Part One and its incredible. Reading more. Wow. So addicted. You really did a good job on this one. |
| Mountaineer83 2007-08-28 ch 5, | abuseahh lovely ! it was a very very good time to read it ! thks |
2006-04-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow. I loved every bit of this story. You have great writing talent! This is one of those stories that suck you in and its all you can think about after you'e done reading it... or maybe I'm just crazy like that :P Anyway, I loved how you kept everyone in character and believable throughout the whole story. It's too bad Will got the short end of the deal (I heart Will |
| Cipher Text 2006-03-19 ch 5, anon. | abusecool story, loved it from start to finnish. just wish it could be longer! |
| Laura Alessandra 2006-03-19 ch 5, | abuseCute ending! Love Weiss. He's so cool. :D If that happens on the show I'd die. Girls can dream, right? This story is so well written, I loved it! |
| Fair Cate 2006-03-19 ch 5, anon. | abuseSweet, very very sweet! Cate |
| Sci Fi Fan Gillian 2006-03-19 ch 5, | abuseGreat story. |
| LanaLai 2006-03-19 ch 5, anon. | abuseAmazing! I LOVED it! The perfect amazng ending. And Weiss was soo in character; I think he is actually my favourite, in spite of Vaughn's sheer hotness! Thankyou for writing this, it's the best fic I've read this year! Lana x They're together!! Whoo! |
| tigger817 2006-03-19 ch 5, | abusenice story - enjoyed the tale. got a little confused at times over who the "I" was at the change of pov, maybe you could just insert a line saying whose it is at the start of the chapter. L |
| ArodLoverus2001 2006-03-18 ch 5, | abuseAwesome story! keep up the great work! |
| Natalie 2006-03-18 ch 5, anon. | abuseGAH! amazing! i loved every word of this story! PLEASE WRITE A SEQUEL! great job, I really loved the idea. S/V FOREVER ~Nat |