Interesting, but doesn't seem very IC. It requires too much suspension of disbelief: Ken is too proud to seek out Daisuke like this, and Daisuke is too honest and pure-hearted to go along with it.

Ooh, a very dark take at a post-epilogue possibility. It's beautiful and yet so very heartrending. Oh ;_; *wibbles*

Good, Ken seems so lost but then again that IS Ken. A very nice fic, well writen, I like the way it was composed a lot. Over all no complaints, very good.

very sad poor Ken !.!

I love the way you wrote it amazing

That was so well written, cute, angst and all! I wish I could be able to write like that... This story is a perfect representation of the truth behind Ken and Daisuke relasionship after the 2nd serie, if you follow the fact that Ken is with Miyako and has children. I know it's the yaoi fan thinking but, aren't we all doing this? SO! One more time: good job and thanks for this fanfic!

well that was good

This is extremely well written, the characters very well portrait. I feel really bad for Ken and Daisuke, but it has such a realistic approach to it, it wouldn't have ended any other way. I enjoyed reading this very much.

ohmilord! this was so good and so intense! you must write more stuff!

Wow... I love how well you describe things. You don't spend paragraphs describing a single indent on a rock, but you make it obvious how it looks. I love writers who can do that effectively, keep writing!

wow that's so...powewrful and so sad! :( and it's good work! Another ficcy?