lol. i so knew he would but it was still awesome.

So hot...it'd be so nice if you had continued the emake out scene...*sigh* Oh well, great anyways :)

HOT! O.O

Amazing description!
Well done.

u shuld do more wit this its awesome

WOW! Well she can definately never ask that question again!
I think from now on when i see Derek I'm gonna remember this ff!
LOL WOW!
Loved it!
~Crystal

i like their part about the bet and how playful the banter was, but the story as a whole was a little too sexual for me.you also might want to watch your switching from first to third person. it get's a little confusing. the way the story was left was also kind of dissapointing. to me it showed it was all for proving a point instead of wanting to do it.

aw, that was such a sad place to leave this story...it so requires a sequel! great job though and the dasey in this was delightfully sexy!!

Damn, that was really hot. And really good! Thanks for the story. :)

i cant blame casey, i would have givin in too... hehehe

Awesome story. O.O
Your writing is amazing!

Great job :)

i like

THAT WAS FRIKEN PERFECTLY HOT SEXY STORY DAYUMM!! GREAT GREAT GREAT JOB! THANK YOU FOR WRITING THIS!! MADE ME FEEL SOO MUCH BETTER LOL THANKS AGEN =D

huh.
that was very...descriptive.

BEST ONE SHOT EVER!