You are SO lucky you wrote that epilogue! you,YOU Sephiroth KILLER! If you had stopped at Chapter 14 my review would have simply been * I HATE YOU* and then I would have proceeded to blow my nose and re-apply my mascara.

It's very good. ^-^

i finally read the epilouge. sorry it took so long. i nearly cried. oh my god. i usually dont review till the last chapter the person has posted so i can save all my hyperness for the end. i loved it. so good. *huggles* i'm in love with it. so sad it's over though. but glad it ended good. hehe.

Awe that was a lovely epilogue!
Tori is so Seph!
Reincarnation perhaps?
great work!

All I can say is that seems a little silly after putting the whole thing up like this.

There are plenty of other explicit fics up here, I really doubt you'll be banned.

=( Sucks that you have to delete it. I had a feeling that I was gonna be coming back to it and re-reading it again. =D It was that good, I'm gonna make sure to check your profile to read it. =(

Hey you don't have to delete it because it has mature content I think. I've seen fics with stuff like this and their authors don't get banned.

=D Clever idea with spelling Sephy's last name backwards. And what a bittersweet ending it is. Right when I saw that, I thought of Tori putting it in there even if it was Sephy. Marlene reminds me of girls that age in rl, 'cause it seems we just wanna be...spoiled but look picture perfect. Loved the storyy, hope you keep on writing in the future. =D

Huahaha
we al lknow the truth Tori!
CX

no use trying to hide your secret identity!
:D

great job on the fic altogether!

oh my god. that was so sad.
actual tears in my eyes.
I hate it when seph dies.
anyway, another fantastic chapter.
cannot wait to read the final one!

Nice way to end it- even tho Seph died
looking forward to the epilogue :D
~RoC

That was so sad! TT_TT I've read this story from the beginning but haven't been able to reveiw but through out it has always been worth 5 stars.
Sad that it's over,
Bugsey58

*sobs* NOES SEPHY>
ahh too late. already dead. C:

well written and a great ending believe it or not.
cant wait for the after story!♥

Woah, it's been a long time since I last read this fic, I remember being one of the first reading it (I stopped at chap 3 ;_;. It had 10-19 reviews back at the time) although I realized i've never even commented once! O_o Woot!

But I'll resume everything to this: Wonderful! I loved it! Sweet and rough at the same time! Sephiroth should have taken him, though.

Great till the end! >/<
I love you! xD

A2D

sniff this chapter made me kinda sad but kinda happy(content?) also