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Reviews For: Warmth

yukibuul
2008-07-12
ch 1,
abuseThat was so cute.
sweetysmart0505
2008-05-08
ch 1,
abuseReally well written. Really enjoyed reading that!
jhon doe
2008-02-26
ch 1,
abuseOh espeaon, you are such a card!
StarGirlK
2006-11-26
ch 1,
abuseHi!
Captain Wolf
2006-11-25
ch 1,
abuseReally sweet. I've never heard the song before, but I read the story and got the message.

Also, when you were describing the conversation between Espeon and Wes:

-Umbreon looked at Espeon expectantly, but Espeon didn't seem to notice. He gave his partner a nudge, and motioned towards Wes. Something clicked in Espeon's brain, and he understood.-

Just something I thought of to put in there to include Umbreon a bit, since you didn't really mention him, and he's important too.

Anyway, it was really nice. I love the Wes/Rui pairing!
Michelicious
2006-10-23
ch 1,
abuseThat was short... but It didn't need to be long everything was there and the shortness make the cuteness effect work perfectly! This was SO cute! COngrats !! I like this couple but I dont write or really read about it... I passed the game though and I think they're great together.

I like backstreet boys and Am not afraid to admit it... Each time I hear one of their popular song I reminisce about good old times when I was younger... and they do have the best love band song :D ... unfortunately I do not know this song... too bad I enjoyed the lyrics thanks Hiro :P

-Rui would rather watch from the sidelines that to have her heart broken.
This is was such a simple but good lines... who hasnt felt that way?? I like lines or feelings description to which everyone can relate and someone that makes a text, story, book to which everyone can relate and that has meaning to eveyrone IS a EXCELLENT author.

You put nice little sweet humor when Wes was being lift by espeon ... :D lol! Cute... Oh yeah did I tell you that I loved the little description at the beginning?! Your grammar was flawless... GREAT JOB...

And this is a REALLY nice way to finish the fic:
Suddenly, she didn’t feel as cold. And it wasn't from the hug. After all, how can body warmth make her feel all warm and fuzzy on the inside?

This was such a cute and sweet line! hehehe I loved it!

You did an awesome job... your the first author to have made a good fanfic among the last 6 i read... thank you! :D
keep it up
!
C ya !
~michelicious
BlueMechPencil
2006-04-11
ch 1,
abuse"We've been over this. I am not going to see her unless I fly or the moon turns blue." Wes grinned, knowing full well that that was not going to be possible. Or so he thought.

Espeon shrugged. 'Fine.' Suddenly Wes was lifted off the ground and floated towards the exit.

"Hey! You didn’t pay for that!" the owner of the pub called.

"Sorry!" Wes yelled and threw the man some money. He then glared at his Espeon. "Cheater." He grumbled.

-Smart aleck pokemon XD!
Winnywriter
2006-04-09
ch 1,
abuseOh yay! I always KNEW that the characters in that game had a little bit of a "thing" there! AWESOME!
shugotenshii
2006-04-08
ch 1,
abusewow, that's cute

^_^
Ashla
2006-02-24
ch 1,
abuseAw cute! ^^ Nice little story you have there :D
Slán slán!
~Ashla~
MalonSings
2006-02-24
ch 1,
abuseKawaii!^-^
dbzgtfan2004
2006-02-23
ch 1,
abuseThis is a cute story. Please make some more. Wes and Rui forever.
Maia's Pen
2006-02-21
ch 1,
abuseAw! *clutches heart* That was adorable.

I wub that song too. ^.^

Nice job. Maia
Hiro the Wolf
2006-02-21
ch 1,
abuseI know it's the same story as before, but I had to review it. And it's not a problem with the lyrics. Keep up the great work!

P.S. Just call me Hiro. My pen name is Hiroshi Yakuza Ketchum because they said to be unique, and just plain Hiro isn't all that great. Again, great story!
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